Reviews for Teamwork
Ominous Rain chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
Hello! My friend told me to read this since she really loved it. It's good so far in my opinion.
Perfectionist chapter 7 . 11/29/2013
You forgot the Uchiha District. You know, that whole part of Konoha owned completely and exclusively by the Uchiha clan?
jj chapter 7 . 11/12/2013
wow definitely a fav
Guest chapter 4 . 10/28/2013
Will Naruto wouldn't just say that no father would all fathers of there cubs pups kits anything have a natural instinct to provide and protect there young
Guest chapter 4 . 10/28/2013
The healing is also due to the uzumaki/senju side of his blood
Guest chapter 2 . 10/28/2013
For fucks sake the seal was put on by the shinigami as well so one it wouldn't get weak two there's a key to it to relock it and three fix the story to at least go with most of canon dipshit
Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
First of all there is no way the kyuubi can have that much control I mean really Minato used the shinigami and his soul to lock HALF the kyuubi chakra and his whole soul
Guest chapter 5 . 10/20/2013
This chapter...gave me so many feels...
Guest chapter 7 . 10/8/2013
Wish there was more yaoi
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 5 . 10/5/2013
What a bunch of hippies! Hahaha jk! I love it.
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 2 . 10/4/2013
Omg wooooow. This story is new very original to me. Wow. Nice
Patrick the observer chapter 7 . 7/1/2013
i have to say this was a really good story, I'm sad there aren't more with the three of them hooking up. Here's hopping you made a sequel. :)
Magus1108 chapter 7 . 5/23/2013
Well, this was interesting. Quite a fun read, to say the least. Never thought much about the pairing before, but Saku/Naru/Sas have an interesting dynamic.
Cha0ticM3ss chapter 7 . 5/15/2013
bahh! that was probably one of the best NaruSasuSaku things i have ever read! wished there was slightly but more NaruSasu...but i'll settle for this entire thing! xD
go into Sakura with Ino telling her parents or the Naruto Living situation...cant wait! :D if you havent already lol
me chapter 3 . 2/20/2013
you say "in askance" a lot, and I am starting to think you aren't familiar with the word. you don't need to say "in." It's just"askance." It's like the word "sideways."

She looked at him sideways.
She looked at him askance.
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