. your story!

Very interesting tale indeed. Look forward to you update. Please continue!

wow. i'm stunned! really good story! i'm speachless! both chapters are great!

how could they know that sakura's pregnant with narutos child? perhaps sasuke had fucked her first? (don't know if he had fucked her... but the had a threesome and so i think... hope you know what i mean )

hope sakura'll calm down soon! (or sasuke'll be forced to slap her!)

OMFG... this is AWESOME.

I can't wait till your nxt chapter! This is so gripping XD

Dear... God...

Holy.

I so taotally totally LOVE THIS FANFIC!

I LOVE YOU!1!

Continue please~!

*Is so happy she bursts into a million blood-patches*

BTW, I think your endings are teh greatest. Do you think you could get the Kyuubi into Sasuke's body/mind too?

Ack! No! The seal can't break! They have to find a way to maintain the seal. It's not fun without Naruto! _ Okay, jokes aside, I love every single bit of this chapter, especially Sasuke's ecchi mind, oogling Naruto first and then Sakura. The story, overall, is very original. I don't think I've ever read a fic like this. And I really like how you portrayed Sakura. She is not a complete bitch who favours Sasuke over Naruto. Yet at the same time, she is not a complete saint for suddenly understanding and accepting everything. She reacted very realisticly; scared, confused and insecure. And that's what I like about it.

Though I have to wonder... Sakura also had sex with Sasuke the night before. So there's a teeny tiny chance that her baby could be Sasuke's, right? *crosses fingers* If that is so, then a big part of their problem is solved and then we can move onto the problem of saving Naruto. (Though do we really have to completely seal off Kyuubi? I'm beginning to like KyuubiNaruto. _)

And my ecchi mind is kicking in. When the entire mess is over, I can see a scene of Naruto and Sasuke "competing" with each other to see which one of them can get Sakura pregnant first. *coughs*

You know... at first... since you didn't update in forever, I thought this was a one-shot. OH DEAR LORD, THANK GOD THAT IT'S NOT! I LOVE YOU (in a totally platonic way) SO MUCH!

Oh my goodness gracious me. This story is SO BLOODY AWESOME! Oh dear lord. *goes hysterical with happy vibes* I am SO glad that you posted on It's authors like you that make reading worthwhile.

And this plotline! Gees, this gets more and MORE exciting as you go along. It's insane with all the twisty turns and twirly spins and oh my, it's just splendid, simply splendid. It's so original and so well thought out so far and oh my, your beta-reader rocks my socks.

I love the flow of this story, you make everything connect so nicely. I love the little bits you stick in, like "...who was Watanabe-san to criticize the Fourth Hokage's work? Before his marriage into the Kagami ninja clan, he'd been nothing but a fat-ass noble and only knew a handful of child-level spells."

good sht good sht, update son or ima hunt ya down!

ASUKA! YOU! NO! *whimpers with Naruto* MWE! T-T

*cuddles Naruto* THAT is a way to write. Awe, it's kidna funny... Sasuke seems to be more in tune with his feelings for some reason.

*shrugs*

HAH! I WAS RIGHT! MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! *parTies*

it's good but i wish it was narusaku b/c those are so rare

naruto threesomes... hell yeah! _

and they're all in-character *sparkly eyes*

Great!I LOVE THIS PAIRING!But there are very few NarSasuSaku, so PLEASE WRITE MORE!

~Sapphirefoxgirl~

i luv this. expecially inner sakura

good story!