Reviews for Nightmare |
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![]() ![]() One word says it all. Magical! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think my favorite part about this whole thing is how EVERYBODY went to save Tea and beat Marik up XD Rex and Weevil saved the day by stopping Marik from escaping! And man is Yami Bakura sneaky like that D: Poor Ryou. I'm so glad Tea's okay,t hanks to everyone's sup[port and her own strength! |
![]() ![]() I freakin' Loved this! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() been reading your fic and had to laugh when i read ch. four. joey is so oblivious with the whole mokuba and serenity dating;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story! xD Very well written and a captivating plot. I'm glad I found it although Marik was one hell of a creep lol. Kinda scared me a little but then again what are horror stories for? :P I loved the portrayal of the characters and how the original gang all came together at the end. :) That last scene with Marik and everyone EPIC. :D Excellent job with this story; I very much enjoyed reading it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just love this fic. I think you've done a great job! |
![]() ![]() wow very good story i loved it specially the last chapter and epilogue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing fic. One of my favorites. Loved it! |
![]() ![]() Shiara seems kinda whore-ish in this chapter. T_T a good friend, but whore-ish. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this fic - there was so much tension and suspence! I'll be honest, and say that I thought that Seto Kaiba was the stalker (power over police, and would've invited her to stay at the mansion). Lame guess, I know, but I just didn't think of Marik. I liked how you protrayed Marik... your logic behind his obsession was good. He really did obsess over her :) It was creepy how he came into the classroom. Joey was hilarious in this - the perfect source of comic relief. I love how he got between Mokuba and Serentiy (cute couple), and how he thought Yugi was referring to Yugi and Ishizu :) lol Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a fantastic story! And yes, what happened was incredibly sappy, especially for Seto Kaiba. Maybe very slightly OOC, but it WAS accounted for by what Yugi said about deadly situations bringing people together... :) Though all of those sitches didn't seem to affect Kaiba in the show... -_- But I still enjoyed the lock-and-key sappiness. And Kaiba can't deny it... coz he still has the marks for it! HA! YES! Yay! Resolution! I really, really liked the reunion of Mai and Duke and Mako and Rex and Weevil with the original gang! Yay, love-fest! :D! (Snuggly!) But poor Ishizu and Odion! How embarrassing and shameful for them! And saddening! Oh, Marik... (shakes head sadly) Lol... Yugi to Joey: J: "Oh, you mean like you and Ishizu?" Y: (stunned and totally bewildered) "Ishizu... what... Joey, you're so dense!" I enjoyed the deep closeness with Joey and Tea! :) That's what he's there for! Tea, you have the best BFFs a girl could ask for! (and they're all dudes! Awwww... :P) Don't worry, Mr. & Mrs. Gardener. And coppers. But mostly parents. You guys are forgiven. :) It really wasn't your fault... :) Lovely work! Great story! :D! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. And a belated, major apology to Tea's parents and the police. But especially to her parents. Sorry, Mr. & Mrs. Gardner. I didn't know you were being mind-controlled. -_- A very intense, action-packed chapter. Fantastic. :D! Too much to describe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely fantastic chapter! Gracious! That bit with Serenity at the end was very well-conceived and beautifully executed. Good lord... The Kaiba mansion must be the safest place on earth... That's almost... That's madness! Helpful and protective madness, but nonetheless... O_O How could ANYONE manage all that... But dude, I want a security system like that! Wow! Mokuba and Serenity... So cute! :) And Joey's comical brotherly protectiveness (as well as Kaiba's good points that Tea mentioned in an earlier chapter). |
![]() ![]() ![]() My serious guess would've been Yami Bakura. Really. I can just kinda fit that in. But Marik? That definitely surprised me. I didn't expect it to be him at all-didn't even think of him. :/ Yep. Yami Bakura breaking up a fight. And Yami Yugi getting into one, along with Tristan and Joey. All freaking attacking Marik. Wow. O_O Mokuba/Serenity? I wondered momentarily last chapter about Serenity acting all weird. But then again, I briefly wondered if she had a crush on Kaiba, but then argued that it's Tea/Seto. Anyhow, it's cute-Mokuba/Serenity-and they are about the same age...? Wait, no...? Poor Ishizu. Horrible to have a raving, murderous, lustful wacko for a brother. :( But he was supposed to be cured! Do you dislike Marik or something? |
![]() ![]() ![]() JoeyTea seems cool. Hmmm... :) Awww, Tea, you're so lucky to have such wonderful friends (going back to last chapter too). It's so good of Joey to let you stay with him. :) And I'm sorry for how Joey has it with his dad... (touches his hand gently and sympathetically) Joseph Wheeler, you're a wonderful person, you know that? :( Poor Tea... |