|Reviews for Within the Chamber she Lies|
| shadowhuntersdiva chapter 26 . 6/5
though i wish there was a sequel
| shadowhuntersdiva chapter 26 . 6/5
i 100% loved ALL of the chapters and the story in general
| JanusGodOfPossibilities chapter 3 . 8/9/2015
Excellent chapter. 2,000/10
Why would she be in danger if they wouldn't even know how she was born? Its not like they were there that day, so how would they even know? If it's such a problem just say they found her one day when she was younger and raised her and also had her as their apprentice.
| Tzarista chapter 26 . 11/19/2014
| sailormoonserenity99 chapter 26 . 10/25/2014
This story is wonderful
| Moonlight Cosmic Angel chapter 26 . 11/22/2013
It was a great read loved the ending you should do a sequel about how they are after going home
| Guest chapter 26 . 7/28/2013
Best bloody story I have ever read
| MagicalMistake chapter 26 . 11/12/2012
Why did it have to end?
| Tsuki Doriimaa chapter 26 . 1/10/2011
Awesome story! _ Really, truly enjoyed reading it!
| Tenshi-Chikyuu chapter 26 . 6/22/2010
GREAT STORY. The only problem I saw was that I wanted to get to see Serenity fly her broom, I bet it would have been faster than Harry's Firebolt...
| WingedEagle chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
Just read the Within the Chamber She Lies Story, was good, just wanted to point out/ask a few things. Firstly, what does this do for the story, especially as it's opening paragraph(s):
Neo-Queen Serenity and her court lived a full and happy life until it is finally time for Lady Serenity to take the throne with Helios at her side. The day of the crowning, Chaos appears once more to shatter the queen’s life.
Serenity retaliates with force, protecting the others with a powerful shield against their will. She fights Chaos with all she has, all along thinking about her days of freedom when she was Sailor Moon, when she could freely roam the city as she pleased.
With one last goodbye smile towards her king, daughter and senshi, she uses the Ginzuishou to banish Chaos once again but in the process Chaos unleashes a deadly attack and shatters the Crystal. The 2 most powerful beings in this universe disappeared without a trace this fateful day, leaving a once more peaceful world behind.
Of course, everyone is devastated but they are all now wondering; she was supposed to become Cosmos after her reign as Neo-Queen Serenity… What happened for her fate to change, and what will happen to her now? It even left Pluto baffled."
And later (i forget where) you mentioned about something abnormal in her blood, but you never mentioned it again... It's just, like you throw clues at the reader that are irrelevant. Might want to watch that.
Found the story overall good, little too fast/unbelievable with the relationship, estrangment of Ron/Hermione and Umbridge's demise though...
But still, one of the better stories out there.
Also, I love your the world without me story, look fowatds to its completion.
keep up the good work.
| Chelly18 chapter 26 . 6/29/2009
wow what a story. This is the first sailor moon/ Harry Potter fic i've ever read. It was interesting and I enjoyed it. Good job :P
| goddessangelofthemoon chapter 26 . 3/25/2009
Fantastic story. I was goin to review after every chapter but I figured it would be easier on both our part if I did it at the end of the story. This story is marvously written. The last chapter has been left open. Maybe you should think about writting another one as a sequal to Within the Chamber She Lies. It would be a great story I reacon. Or you could get someone else to help you co-write it? Don't ask me im not relly good at writting stories, im more of an editor though i do have some stories i have written. I so loved this story and bringing the Basilisk back was so cool.
Serenity Lunar Moon-Booth
(real name no joke)
| Ravenclaw's Kitten chapter 26 . 2/25/2009
Omigosh. This was so bloody amazingly brilliant. There are no words to describe it. You are an AMAZING writer, with some serious talent. I loved this story so much. I wish there was more. Really really really wish there was more, but if it doesn't happen I want to tell you that this was just WOW!
Much love and thanks
| rio45 chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
Just found your story and I like it. I have never reviewed a first chapter before but I like this story.