Reviews for Party Up
JenLari chapter 5 . 10/13/2008
This story was excellent. Nice Work.
yalyssa chapter 5 . 3/6/2006
this story was so hilarious, "i wasn't trying to commit suicide, i was trying to fly" that cracked me up. your writing is so funny. thx for the gr8 fic
castmyashes chapter 5 . 1/21/2006
Whipped cream and Cole. Damn that's kinky. Great job.
ethereal girl chapter 5 . 3/31/2005
Great Story having phoepe strip and cole jealous - please write more
S. A. Bonasi chapter 5 . 1/7/2005
Rake the Sky,

And a wonderful finish!



S. A. Bonasi chapter 4 . 1/7/2005
Rake the Sky,

“See, the thing is, a few centuries back he and the Source got into a—rift. Something about a liter of vodka and a rubber chicken, I’m not sure, it was before my time."


Oh, and it took the blonde a few seconds to decide? Is she slow or something!

S. A. Bonasi chapter 3 . 1/7/2005
Rake the Sky,

So I was right! Real good job with Cole's character, there, and I like the line, "Innocents are out there, in need of my corruption." Hee.

S. A. Bonasi chapter 2 . 1/7/2005
Rake the Sky,

Heh. The Fire Den seems like the kind of place demons would hang out at. Zêta would probably love it. Lol.

S. A. Bonasi chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
Rake the Sky,

Okay, you had me giggling all throughout the chapter with the way you combined the conversations. Also, good job with the characterizations!

shel chapter 5 . 9/19/2004
i'm glad i scrolled thu pages and pages of stories or i'd've missed the last 2 chapters of this enjoyable tale...a little disappointing the vanquish happened in a brief sum-up but the bantering more than made up for it...loved the history of the demons involved and also the way paige & phoebe were both freed from their escapades...thanks for sharing this story!
Real-Blonde-in-Florida chapter 5 . 9/14/2004
Great story - absolutely love the ending! Please keep writing Phoebe and Cole stories! If you write, I'll read them!
Alyssa Halliwell chapter 5 . 9/14/2004
Aw it's a shame it's ended, was a great fic, but a teen charmed ones sounds cool
Badgirl21 chapter 5 . 9/13/2004
Cool story! I like how they worked everything out and stuff.
Tzarista chapter 5 . 9/13/2004
great story :)
CharmedColeLover chapter 4 . 9/11/2004
Hey! really like this story... It's great.. I just love Cole and Phoebe.. i felt cheated when Phoebe killed him! (calms self down) anyho i like to forget about that by reading fanfics where they are still together.. lol. also love Loves Intervention.. plz continue both of your stories
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