| Reviews for The Return |
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   meguhanu chapter 7 . 4/6/2010 this story is very cool. update soon please |
| silvertwilightgemini chapter 7 . 12/6/2007 please update |
| Athina Dark-Angel of Death chapter 7 . 8/30/2005 Lovely as always. Waiting for next update |
| magicalplay chapter 7 . 8/25/2005 This chapter was very exciting, please update soon. |
| Wings chapter 7 . 8/25/2005 woaahh! That was mad! This is like the anime never ended _ You have a whole new story goin on here! And damn im glad its not yaoi! So much action...and can i sense romance in the air? Huh? Huh? *Nudge nudge* update it soon! (btw,...i feel bad for you, such good chapters,...yet so few reviews...) |
| Athina Dark-Angel of Death chapter 6 . 8/15/2005 Hurry hurry please I really don't like waiting for the next chapter this is so good and I wanna see what happens next. |
| Athina Dark-Angel of Death chapter 6 . 4/24/2005 I really like this story but this is one problem with your transition from chapter to chapter. You completely dropped of and forgot the condition of Daisuke and what they were doing and just switch to him being at home for your next seen when you went from chapter 5 to 6 and didn't tell us what happened. Other then that keep it up. |
| lahz chapter 3 . 4/13/2005 Very good! It's "Ohaiyo" not "Ohio". Ohio is a state. WOOHOO! Ok siriously now... |
| yaoilovershiro chapter 6 . 4/12/2005 CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE |
| RazorBladexIceCream chapter 6 . 4/8/2005 SWEET! You updated! (Faints) (Then dies) zombie me: Plaese update before I suck your blood! |
| Constructor chapter 1 . 3/1/2005 Now, I'm pretty sure I've review'd this story earlier, but I was just at your author page, and desided that some extra encouraging is in order. I mean, really, there aren't that many good fics at all out there, specially not about DNA, so I was REALLY relieved, when I found this fic. It is, really, in all things considered perfect. I, at least, am waiting exitedly for a new chapter! So, please keep up writing...Oh and one thing, thanks for making Daisuke more of a leading charakter. I am really anooyed in all the stories out there, that are just about Dark, or are some sort of Daisuke/Satoshi... So, for last time, thanks... |
| RazorBladexIceCream chapter 5 . 2/28/2005 YESA... (Little sister is about to slap me) (I use hands as protection.) I'm okay... (Little sister puts hand down.) Please update soon. |
| RazorBladexIceCream chapter 4 . 2/28/2005 HAHAHAHA! (Little sister slaps me.) OW! That hurt fool! Oh! I think this chapter is funny! Now... Youy know what I'm going to say don't you? Leave me alone! Must read on! |
| RazorBladexIceCream chapter 2 . 2/28/2005 Even better! Now... LEAVE ME ALONE! I must read on! |
| RazorBladexIceCream chapter 1 . 2/28/2005 Whoa... 0.0 This is great so far... Leave me alone! I'm going to keep reading!... I said leave me alone! Must read! |