Reviews for Midori No Me
Guest chapter 15 . 6/24/2017
Demon Eyes Kyo did not go for cute.

He did not nod like and idiot and turn to lead the way.(I think that 'an' article should be used rather than 'and' conjunction for it to make more sense colloquially)

He did not glance over his shoulder to see if she was following or not.
Animallover chapter 32 . 6/20/2017
Hi again. I'm still re-reading this story. Towards the middle of this chapter you basically said Okuni had slept with other men before Kyo, but when Okuni's past with Kyo was first explained a number of chapters ago, it sounded very much like Okuni hadn't slept with anyone before Kyo.
Animallover chapter 15 . 6/17/2017
I was just re-reading this fic to refresh my memory of everything that happened and I realized that in this chapter it sounds like you're saying Nobunaga was the previous Crimson King, but since Nobunaga is a human (in the loosest sense of the word) that doesn't make sense.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2017
iv'e been searching for samurai deeper kyo you for writing a good one...
ill be looking forward for your future stories, cuz
your stories is fun to read,it was humurous and creative.
maya-nytso chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
Hey ! Just wanted to tell you that I love your story ! It's so intense, so interesting to read. I'm a french girl and althought I can't understand everything it stirs so much emotions up in me. I love your fic alco because it is long and you can properly develop your characters and you do it in a very good way ! I added you to my favorites stories because you deserve it ! I hope you will continue to write so wonderful stories about SDK :)
she chapter 56 . 5/7/2016
one of the best fanfic i've read so far. followed this story for 11 years. totally worth the wait. now awaiting the sequel to finish before i start reading them, or i'll go crazy waiting fr the next chappy..
Yira chapter 18 . 3/9/2016
I think in the given sentences...

Yuya did deserve and answer however and he answer her,…in his own way.

"What do I think of you, huh? Woman, I think you're ugly."
It's supposed to go like this...

Yuya did deserve an answer however and he answer her,…in his own way.

"What do I think of you, huh? Woman, I think you're ugly."
Basically 'an' article was mistaken as 'and' conjunction by autocorrect in your word processing application.
Thanks again for writing my most favourite samurai deeper kyo, what-if fanfic.
donnakrizzel chapter 56 . 3/9/2016
Hello there! I really like your story. I've been waiting for this for a very long time since I started reading it. It made me happy when I saw that you finished this amazing story and a sequel to boot!Anata wa honto ni sugoii ne! Ganbatte! _
Tsukiba chapter 4 . 2/7/2016
I love your story ! It's dark and sweet, all I wanted right now. Good job there !
Francis chapter 56 . 1/30/2016
Wonderful. Just wow. Had my stomach in knots and crying at the end. Love the changes. Love how the characters retain their personalities from the manga. I have nothing bad to say. You are a wonderful writer. And i want to thank you for completing this story. Now on to the sequel
Yira chapter 15 . 1/17/2016
Good chapter.
I found a little error.
He did not nod like and idiot and turn to lead the way.

He did not glance over his shoulder to see if she was following or not.
I believe in the above line the correct grammar would be-

He did not nod like an idiot and turn to lead the way. ('and' was used in place of article 'an')

He did not glance over his shoulder to see if she was following or not.
Musicfight23 chapter 56 . 12/17/2015
Sorry, not logged in right now. All I can say is OMG YOU UPDATED AND COMPLETED THIS FIC ?*dies* I love this story, Samurai Deeper Kyo was one of the first anime's I got into then I read the manga and I was all "What anime?" Seriously, you wrote the story well. Looking forward to any new stories from you. Thanks again for the journey! :)
Stunning Sunset chapter 55 . 12/9/2015
Hm, I was wondering why Kyo suddenly stopped fighting his sword's attacks on his psyche? Or why Tenryo stopped attacking him for his emotional state when he became more open to emotions rather than lose himself to hate? It felt like you simply forgot about that point once the romance really started going. The rest was very good!
Toreh chapter 56 . 11/28/2015
This was absolutely amazing. Thank you so much for keeping this fandom alive. Your writing is phenomenal and kept me up late. I'll be heading over to that sequel now.
Harlett chapter 50 . 8/8/2015
This chapter makes me think of something. As mentioned for good Kyoshiro, think of Kyo reproducing (ignoring how sexy that is) and the years he spent as a... libertine man?
How come he never before had left a pregnant woman and now he does? He was careful with that en some way or he forced them to protect themselves? During his beautiful Honeymoon he not even thought about that possibility (or little Yuya)

And while the idea of assimilating this fact is rare... it's also funny (Daddy Kyo 3~)

I'm a bad person to think his insecurities born from Yuya into his life are interesting and entertaining to some extent, of course, because in the end they are for nothing.
Yuya loves him! They'll have cute wolf pups that deep down will be as cute and helpless like bunnies (Uhh... maybe it's the other way around, right?)
(It's like seeing that Uchiha Sasuke suffers because Haruno Sakura's welfare :D)

So he considering that she will not stop love him for more crazy he put on the battlefield, it is one less worry for him and that's nice. At least until he ran into Kyoshiro xD
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