Reviews for Midori No Me
she chapter 56 . 5/7
one of the best fanfic i've read so far. followed this story for 11 years. totally worth the wait. now awaiting the sequel to finish before i start reading them, or i'll go crazy waiting fr the next chappy..
Yira chapter 18 . 3/9
Hi..
I think in the given sentences...

Yuya did deserve and answer however and he answer her,…in his own way.

"What do I think of you, huh? Woman, I think you're ugly."
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It's supposed to go like this...

Yuya did deserve an answer however and he answer her,…in his own way.

"What do I think of you, huh? Woman, I think you're ugly."
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Basically 'an' article was mistaken as 'and' conjunction by autocorrect in your word processing application.
Thanks again for writing my most favourite samurai deeper kyo, what-if fanfic.
Sincerely,
Yira
donnakrizzel chapter 56 . 3/9
Hello there! I really like your story. I've been waiting for this for a very long time since I started reading it. It made me happy when I saw that you finished this amazing story and a sequel to boot!Anata wa honto ni sugoii ne! Ganbatte! _
Tsukiba chapter 4 . 2/7
I love your story ! It's dark and sweet, all I wanted right now. Good job there !
Francis chapter 56 . 1/30
Wonderful. Just wow. Had my stomach in knots and crying at the end. Love the changes. Love how the characters retain their personalities from the manga. I have nothing bad to say. You are a wonderful writer. And i want to thank you for completing this story. Now on to the sequel
Yira chapter 15 . 1/17
Good chapter.
I found a little error.
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He did not nod like and idiot and turn to lead the way.

He did not glance over his shoulder to see if she was following or not.
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I believe in the above line the correct grammar would be-

He did not nod like an idiot and turn to lead the way. ('and' was used in place of article 'an')

He did not glance over his shoulder to see if she was following or not.
Musicfight23 chapter 56 . 12/17/2015
Sorry, not logged in right now. All I can say is OMG YOU UPDATED AND COMPLETED THIS FIC ?*dies* I love this story, Samurai Deeper Kyo was one of the first anime's I got into then I read the manga and I was all "What anime?" Seriously, you wrote the story well. Looking forward to any new stories from you. Thanks again for the journey! :)
Stunning Sunset chapter 55 . 12/9/2015
Hm, I was wondering why Kyo suddenly stopped fighting his sword's attacks on his psyche? Or why Tenryo stopped attacking him for his emotional state when he became more open to emotions rather than lose himself to hate? It felt like you simply forgot about that point once the romance really started going. The rest was very good!
Toreh chapter 56 . 11/28/2015
This was absolutely amazing. Thank you so much for keeping this fandom alive. Your writing is phenomenal and kept me up late. I'll be heading over to that sequel now.
Harlett chapter 50 . 8/8/2015
This chapter makes me think of something. As mentioned for good Kyoshiro, think of Kyo reproducing (ignoring how sexy that is) and the years he spent as a... libertine man?
How come he never before had left a pregnant woman and now he does? He was careful with that en some way or he forced them to protect themselves? During his beautiful Honeymoon he not even thought about that possibility (or little Yuya)

And while the idea of assimilating this fact is rare... it's also funny (Daddy Kyo 3~)

I'm a bad person to think his insecurities born from Yuya into his life are interesting and entertaining to some extent, of course, because in the end they are for nothing.
Yuya loves him! They'll have cute wolf pups that deep down will be as cute and helpless like bunnies (Uhh... maybe it's the other way around, right?)
(It's like seeing that Uchiha Sasuke suffers because Haruno Sakura's welfare :D)

So he considering that she will not stop love him for more crazy he put on the battlefield, it is one less worry for him and that's nice. At least until he ran into Kyoshiro xD
Harlett chapter 49 . 8/8/2015
I am speechless...
two puppies...

Pd. Hate you Fubuki!
Amacor16 chapter 56 . 8/3/2015
First off, THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS. Kyo and Yuya are my favorite pairing and there's not alot of long, well thought out stories of them. So thank you, thank you, thank you. I love this, I love all the different points of view, I've never read so much insight from kyo,(it's magical lol) and how Yuya is still fierce yet lovable. The only other story I've loved from SDK was removed after waiting years for her to update so I'm so happy you continued with your story, I loved everything about it and I'm DEFINITELY rushing to read the sequel lol. Your writing was amazing, story line, dialogue, just wonderful. :)
Harlett chapter 48 . 7/22/2015
This is an important chapter. Finally his memories return. The mental and emotional chaos. The drama. And the great desire to embrace this man who just wanted and craved a little love (openly, good and pure).
*sigh*

This deserves more words but I'm short of them. It has left a good taste and a peace that was touching and beautiful.

And if you assured me that someone is going to kick Fubukis ass, I'll be much happier :'D
quivering quill chapter 56 . 7/18/2015
i loved it. and looking forward to reading the continuation!
heaven's-myth chapter 56 . 7/16/2015
~;~ ~;~ ~;~ flowers at your feet!
I absolutely enjoyed 'Midori No Me' and I will be patiently waiting for the sequel :)

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