In the first instance, I don't know how you got the Seles being evil thing. I also don't think Zelos is pigheaded enough to really think that about Sheena. I also REALLY don't think that Yuan - the man who dedicated his life in a ceaseless attempt to destroy Yggdrasil - would help anyone do anything that benefited Mithos' goals.

Boo.

You've really captured the personalities of the characters well. However, there's too much talking. You should describe the surroundings more often rather than the characters all the time; after all it is both worlds they're exploring!

I hve the game Tales of Symphonia too! The chapter is cool, but you should make a story with Genis and Presea. Maybe something about joining Raine with the whole half-elf thing. UPDATE SOON!

I like the story and the pairing. I suppose I like most of the possible pairings in ToS, but this one is one of them you have to write well to make it work, and I think you do a good job of that. Apart from some detail issues with the game plot and outcome, said earlier in other reviews, this story is excellent and I look forward to reading the rest. Keep it up!

Everyone is in-character! That is so rare these days, I think. You did a great job writing the story so far. You should really continue this fic! It's developing quite nicely. Please don't quit!

hey i think this is gr8 but b4 i get my hopes up can u sumhoy tell me if ur gona continue

more more more it's great!

If you don't update soon I'll KILL YOU!

So...when does the romance start?

omfg! fucking update already! how long have it been? about 4 or 5 months already and u havent updated! i really like this story so would u plz update? man!

Great story. Update soon.

i agree such a better person over all than collete wish they had a longer ending if you end it with sheena

this story kickes ass i love the coupling of lloyd and sheena. please add more to this.

Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)

nice work