|Reviews for The Journey After|
| arpadarp chapter 3 . 9/17/2010
In the first instance, I don't know how you got the Seles being evil thing. I also don't think Zelos is pigheaded enough to really think that about Sheena. I also REALLY don't think that Yuan - the man who dedicated his life in a ceaseless attempt to destroy Yggdrasil - would help anyone do anything that benefited Mithos' goals.
| Becky C chapter 3 . 10/13/2006
You've really captured the personalities of the characters well. However, there's too much talking. You should describe the surroundings more often rather than the characters all the time; after all it is both worlds they're exploring!
| mercedes fernandez chapter 1 . 1/9/2006
I hve the game Tales of Symphonia too! The chapter is cool, but you should make a story with Genis and Presea. Maybe something about joining Raine with the whole half-elf thing. UPDATE SOON!
| Upwelling chapter 1 . 11/28/2005
I like the story and the pairing. I suppose I like most of the possible pairings in ToS, but this one is one of them you have to write well to make it work, and I think you do a good job of that. Apart from some detail issues with the game plot and outcome, said earlier in other reviews, this story is excellent and I look forward to reading the rest. Keep it up!
| steamedporkbun chapter 3 . 8/19/2005
Everyone is in-character! That is so rare these days, I think. You did a great job writing the story so far. You should really continue this fic! It's developing quite nicely. Please don't quit!
| TrueGamer chapter 3 . 6/11/2005
hey i think this is gr8 but b4 i get my hopes up can u sumhoy tell me if ur gona continue
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/23/2005
more more more it's great!
| ChaosGriffin chapter 3 . 3/27/2005
If you don't update soon I'll KILL YOU!
| Wyvern's Darkness chapter 3 . 2/3/2005
So...when does the romance start?
| chocolat24 chapter 3 . 2/3/2005
omfg! fucking update already! how long have it been? about 4 or 5 months already and u havent updated! i really like this story so would u plz update? man!
| Shadow Dark-Blade chapter 3 . 1/10/2005
Great story. Update soon.
| Xeno13 chapter 1 . 10/7/2004
i agree such a better person over all than collete wish they had a longer ending if you end it with sheena
| achika chapter 3 . 9/26/2004
this story kickes ass i love the coupling of lloyd and sheena. please add more to this.
| warprince2000 chapter 3 . 8/26/2004
Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz)
| Shadow Fox 05 chapter 3 . 8/22/2004