Reviews for The Journey After |
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![]() ![]() ![]() In the first instance, I don't know how you got the Seles being evil thing. I also don't think Zelos is pigheaded enough to really think that about Sheena. I also REALLY don't think that Yuan - the man who dedicated his life in a ceaseless attempt to destroy Yggdrasil - would help anyone do anything that benefited Mithos' goals. Boo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've really captured the personalities of the characters well. However, there's too much talking. You should describe the surroundings more often rather than the characters all the time; after all it is both worlds they're exploring! |
![]() ![]() I hve the game Tales of Symphonia too! The chapter is cool, but you should make a story with Genis and Presea. Maybe something about joining Raine with the whole half-elf thing. UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story and the pairing. I suppose I like most of the possible pairings in ToS, but this one is one of them you have to write well to make it work, and I think you do a good job of that. Apart from some detail issues with the game plot and outcome, said earlier in other reviews, this story is excellent and I look forward to reading the rest. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Everyone is in-character! That is so rare these days, I think. You did a great job writing the story so far. You should really continue this fic! It's developing quite nicely. Please don't quit! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey i think this is gr8 but b4 i get my hopes up can u sumhoy tell me if ur gona continue |
![]() ![]() more more more it's great! |
![]() ![]() If you don't update soon I'll KILL YOU! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So...when does the romance start? |
![]() ![]() ![]() omfg! fucking update already! how long have it been? about 4 or 5 months already and u havent updated! i really like this story so would u plz update? man! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i agree such a better person over all than collete wish they had a longer ending if you end it with sheena |
![]() ![]() this story kickes ass i love the coupling of lloyd and sheena. please add more to this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter (update soon Plz) |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice work |