Reviews for Sweet Waters
Boneswing'er chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
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Moth Gypsy chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
I like your writing style, its something I havent really seen before, even if its a bit hard to follow. And I love the theme, the emphasis you put on childhood juxtaposed with, well, being a ninja Cx its good
ThePepperSheep chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
It's amazing how such a dark scene could be written so serenly - the imagery and background were wonderful. I could literally feel the setting -that is something I haven't seen many fanfic writers do.

My favorite line:

I honestly can't choose. Almost every line has beauty in it.

Great, WONDERFUL job.
Animeaddict666 chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
"The river of the Sharingan tastes like Yakushi sweets."

Holy...that line made me want to scream and run. Terrifying foreshadowing.
CataclysmicallyTerrible chapter 1 . 3/29/2008
Beautifully written. Itachi's perception of rank.
Aerlyn-Angel-of-Death chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
Very creepy, but... so beautiful and peaceful, at the same time... I want to drift off to sleep and shudder at the same time. Really cool.
Renika chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
Two words: You rock.
D1G1T4L darkness chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
ah how awesome. a little fic about itachi and shisui is just what i wanted to read
RurouniGochan chapter 1 . 2/6/2006
Woah. Creepy fantastic! The imagery in this story is what really brought it to life, despite the chilling death in it.

Murder told in such simple beautiful tones. Frightening and awesome. Great job.
anonymous chapter 1 . 1/29/2006
Damn...the whole story was so calm, like the river.
wellduh chapter 1 . 11/18/2005
...wow.

I loved it. The opening lines in particular.
Fantastical Queen Ebony Black chapter 1 . 7/2/2005
an interesting take on shisui's murder. i do like it, and the atmosphere you set up. very creepy, especially the opening.
UE chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
...wow. it was brilliant of you to use the 2nd POV perspective on this, it fit the atmosphere of the story so well. it heightened the psycho-aspect of itachi, too. it's like he's beside himself when doing what he did. but yeah. oh and the first line sort of made me gigglesnort. hehe. but wow. i am simply amazed at how beautifully you write. and a lot of your stories are from series that i love so expect a ton of reviews from me P
kayoko-chan chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
oh...yum.

loved the idea of wrapping drugs in sweets *nods* is that way itachi likes dango? heh

thank you for writing this piece on Itachi killing Shisui.
Staarose chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
Chilling. I like it. You have a lovely writing style, and you tell a tale of murder so beautifully, as if it were an ordinary summer afternoon...Nice!
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