Reviews for Grey
Guest chapter 14 . 4/29
It's terrible to see such an amazing fic abandoned. I've read it several times already, there aren't many good fics with this pairing, unfortunately. I understand that the author is not going to finish the story, but maybe she could at least outline in a comment how she intended to finish it? Please?
Erimenthe chapter 14 . 4/27
Is there any chance that you will be updating this at any time in the future? It really is a good story and many want to see what happens, including me of course. I really would love to see Hermione manage to make the potion that Severus Snape, and Lucius, couldn't lmao (just because he and Lucius deserve to be taken down a peg and taught that muggle born can be so much better sometimes).

Not so sure what I want to see when it comes to her "friends" but I do kind of want to see what happens when (if?) Draco wakes up and what about Narcissa and Bellatrix? Please let us know soon.
bumblebee37 chapter 14 . 1/1
Oh, if you ever come back to this story, you would have my undying gratitude. It's so good.
RedsAttic chapter 14 . 8/25/2016

Please continue this fantastic story...
Guest chapter 1 . 6/18/2016
Wow, all the reviewers seem really upset about this story being abandoned. Well, hope you come back someday.
Pyre13 chapter 14 . 5/6/2016
This is absolutely torturous... down right horrid! That you can write such an absolutely incredible story and not finish it! This has the potential to one of the epics... Really, once of those stories that everyone knows, and everyone loves... if only it was finished... There's another 100,000 words in there just screaming to get out..

Honestly, this story is ridiculously good, and I'm heart broken that I didn't notice this was incomplete before I started it, as this is the biggest cliff hanger I've ever had to deal with...

I'm going to have to write my own end to this in my notebook just to have some closure! Silly, fabulous writer that you are!
LadyJoker97 chapter 14 . 1/4/2016
Please write more.
ObsidianPhantom chapter 1 . 11/26/2015
I hate stories that are left to rot... Why? Why is it always the BEST FUCKING FIC'S OUT THERE that are never finished? WHY!?

Ugh. I am sad.
Wicked.Intentions chapter 14 . 10/25/2015
I wish you would continue this story...
Guest chapter 14 . 7/4/2015
I truly hate when people don't finish their stories. It would be better if they never were started in the first place.
KarukMomma chapter 14 . 6/15/2015
I discovered your story yesterday and read through the 14 chapters you have posted before I registered that you hadn't updated it in almost 10 years and it's unfinished. LMAO! I'm really sorry that you stopped where you did because it was getting really good and I was hoping to see what you had in store for Lucius/Hermione. :)
ObsidianPhantom chapter 14 . 6/1/2015
YOU'RE SO CRUEL! EVIL! DASTARDLY FIEND! *Sobs in the corner pathetically*

I have seen stories that haven't been updated in years, some that hadn't been touched since 09', 011', even 07' but NEVER have I seen a fic let to rot since 05'!

So. Cruel! *Weeps* A whole decade! A DECADE!

And it's such an awesome story! Lucius is completely fucking badass! His characterization reminds me of Draco in His Beautiful, Haunting Eyes. I love the menace and cunning and sadism in his character! So damn cool! So predatory! Gives me shivers!

Curious! Are you dead? Did you die? Or are you one of those authors that suddenly lose interest in the fandom and just drop the story because they can't write about it anymore? *Sulks* You should've at least put up a discontinued sign...

I read this all in three hours and are left near insane with want for another chapter! Fully KNOWING that one isn't coming. The HORROR! You suck. *Cries despairingly*

One of the best damn Lucius/Hermione fic's and its left to rot. Life is full of let-downs. :(

I swear its a trend in Fanfiction here! The best gifted, awesome authors out there write all these breathtaking stories and then never finish them. It's horrible! I couldn't imagine doing that to my own fans. Yeah, I know it's 'just' fanfiction and we people have actual lives to focus on, but if you start something - anything - you should finish it.

*Sigh* I have a hunch this will probably never be read... But if it is I am a loyal fan of this story now even in its incomplete state; it's still a fic I will enjoy and wonder about.
hmunday92 chapter 14 . 5/4/2015
I love this story so much was wondering if you are going to continue it?
prose.titute chapter 14 . 4/4/2015
THIS IS TOO DAMN GOOD FOR YOU TO ABANDON. OH MY GOD I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ARE LEAVING US HANGING. I know it's been almost a decade but PLEASE magically update and give us another dose of sensuous Lumione interaction... please? xxx
prose.titute chapter 1 . 4/3/2015
Okay despite the summary I was a bit confused who the boy was and then yeah it clicked quickly lol. Really looking forward to reading this!
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