Reviews for Grey
sandy.morganlopez chapter 14 . 6/15
I discovered your story yesterday and read through the 14 chapters you have posted before I registered that you hadn't updated it in almost 10 years and it's unfinished. LMAO! I'm really sorry that you stopped where you did because it was getting really good and I was hoping to see what you had in store for Lucius/Hermione. :)
ObsidianPhantom chapter 14 . 6/1
YOU'RE SO CRUEL! EVIL! DASTARDLY FIEND! *Sobs in the corner pathetically*

I have seen stories that haven't been updated in years, some that hadn't been touched since 09', 011', even 07' but NEVER have I seen a fic let to rot since 05'!

So. Cruel! *Weeps* A whole decade! A DECADE!

And it's such an awesome story! Lucius is completely fucking badass! His characterization reminds me of Draco in His Beautiful, Haunting Eyes. I love the menace and cunning and sadism in his character! So damn cool! So predatory! Gives me shivers!

Curious! Are you dead? Did you die? Or are you one of those authors that suddenly lose interest in the fandom and just drop the story because they can't write about it anymore? *Sulks* You should've at least put up a discontinued sign...

I read this all in three hours and are left near insane with want for another chapter! Fully KNOWING that one isn't coming. The HORROR! You suck. *Cries despairingly*

One of the best damn Lucius/Hermione fic's and its left to rot. Life is full of let-downs. :(

I swear its a trend in Fanfiction here! The best gifted, awesome authors out there write all these breathtaking stories and then never finish them. It's horrible! I couldn't imagine doing that to my own fans. Yeah, I know it's 'just' fanfiction and we people have actual lives to focus on, but if you start something - anything - you should finish it.

*Sigh* I have a hunch this will probably never be read... But if it is I am a loyal fan of this story now even in its incomplete state; it's still a fic I will enjoy and wonder about.
hmunday92 chapter 14 . 5/4
I love this story so much was wondering if you are going to continue it?
prose.titute chapter 14 . 4/4
THIS IS TOO DAMN GOOD FOR YOU TO ABANDON. OH MY GOD I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ARE LEAVING US HANGING. I know it's been almost a decade but PLEASE magically update and give us another dose of sensuous Lumione interaction... please? xxx
prose.titute chapter 1 . 4/3
Okay despite the summary I was a bit confused who the boy was and then yeah it clicked quickly lol. Really looking forward to reading this!
Guest chapter 14 . 3/29
please write some more i love this story
waterflame4991 chapter 10 . 2/24
I remember reading this story long ago and I just happened on it again and it has gotten even better with age. I have never read anything like this! I'm not even sure if you are still on here but I'll still try asking-are you writing anywhere else or have you published anything? I would love to read more of your work!
Scoti chapter 1 . 1/15
Will you update? Very interesting story and very well written
Danikae chapter 14 . 12/16/2014
I know its been so long but this story is really good please, please, please, finish it.
Guest chapter 14 . 9/5/2014
So sad it ends here... so much potential! !
breakingheart93 chapter 14 . 7/7/2014
ahhh! you have to continue this wonderful LM/HG story!
mshccs chapter 14 . 6/30/2014
I know you did not update this fic for a very long time and there is only a small chance that you're checking your fanfic account, but please, please, please continue this story! I suuuupeeeer like how the story is going and i like your portrayal of Lucius' and Hermione's personality! This is a great story, please finish this... :)
bloomsburry chapter 14 . 6/10/2014
OMG! Why hasn't this story been updated? Please update soon! this is awesome!
nikyta chapter 14 . 11/25/2013
catsgotmytongue chapter 14 . 3/24/2013
I came across this gem the other night and saw that it had not been updated in 8 years.
Hopefully, you have reached your goal of becoming a school teacher and I know working with children is quite exhausting. That being said, could you find some time to dust off this old story? I am sure there are many of us who are waiting over what that bad, bad, BAD Lucius will do with our young heroine next! ;)
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