Reviews for The Siren's Immortal
teacrumb chapter 1 . 9/9/2006
Well, a long adventure would be great! Very intriguing start for a Jack Sparrow epic. But DON'T NEGLECT THE SANDS SEQUEL. PLEASE. It would destroy me.
angelwingz21 chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
This is an incredibly good story!
Depp Fan chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
It was a great story you need to expand it cause I need to know what happens next
derangedfangirl chapter 1 . 10/23/2005
wow! this is an incredible piece of writing! keep writing *begs*
meowbooks chapter 1 . 8/26/2005
Is it possible? I have loved your story for such a length of time it's astonishing to me that I haven't reviewed yet!

Beautifully written, poetic, serene,tranquil, detailed and elegant.
BabyBoy1 chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
Yes, I'd like to see this story develop. I am still waiting for more than the 39 posted chapters of your Sands' fic! Please keep them coming!
Ailidh chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
yes please make this into a longer story. it sounds as though it would be an amazing story.
jenthegypsy chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
My damned luck to discover this site at 9:00 p.m.

It is now almost 2 a.m. the following morning and I just can't go on reading any more...


I can't turn in without adding my vote for the Long Adventure; the expansion, the added delight of the unexpected, and more of our Jack, who was born here on the dying breath of Dylan Jackson Laraine. I am blown away. More than that, I believe...

The first tale I read tonight was exceptionally well crafted, as is this, the last for the evening. In between I read many 'good stories', but none hold the promise of "The Siren's Immortal".

Now, bring me that horizon...
ringbearers-gaurdian chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
Well bloody hell, I thought I'd reveiwed this already... tsk tsk tsk on me... See what happens when Sands keeps me so busy...

Anyway, EXCELLENT, EXCELLENT EXCELLENT, what can I say, but VERY well done! Although, Dylan was an interesting name choice...;)
Winged Golden Tiger chapter 1 . 11/3/2004
Hey, luv this is a trully fantastic -beggining- of a really beautiful story! I hope you'll update soon and that you'll make Jack be a siren! What a beautiful view he would give us! *drool*

DemonicPelicans chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
Oh man! How wonderful was that?

If you were to continue this, i would be your biggest fan! Many praises~

ellennar chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
Don't know how I missed this earlier but I would LOVE to see more. Put me down as a long adventure vote if you're still debating wether or not to add to this!
OutlawJacksBonnyLass chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
Ok, I know I've already reviewed this on another board, but I've gotta leave a note here and say that I can't wait to see where this is going!

VERY well thought out and executed!
Lou chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
I love it, I hope you deside to carry it farther, Lovely, Lovely.
Lynx Ryder chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
oh, what an interesting idea! I love it! There are so many things that could be explored.

""I be no doctor, luv, but I sense this hole in my chest be the cause of my present difficulty.""~~loved that line.

I would love to see this turned into a longer story, if you have the time.
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