Reviews for A Grave Error In Judgement
Cleon16 chapter 1 . 11/24/2017
I need more!
RinDrakaina chapter 1 . 8/7/2017
I love it. Just finished rereading for the 3rd time. Please continue!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2015
good, but hard to read due to lack of punctuation
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
I tried to read it, and it seemed like a great plot. But without quotation marks I couldn't get a hundred words in without being confused and forcing me to stop.
Abbie chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
Its a nice story :)
But may isuggestusing double quotes for the dialogues?
Amras2007 chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Where is the rest!? I love it, hope you continue it.
BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
Very well written.
Articx-Frost chapter 1 . 9/20/2013
This looks like a really good concept and start to what could be a really interesting story. I would love to see this expanded and continued.
kittensgalor chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
This was a great story but the lack of quotation marks made it rather confusing. The parts that you decided to leave as little summaries should have also had the names fully spelt out instead of leaving initials. The initials also made the relating parts confusing.
slmncpm chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
i love this, it is too bad there isn't more of it!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
It's bugging me that you don't have quotation marks. All in all its a really awesome story
Guest chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
You should really write a sequel b/c this story was amazing.
James018 chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
A good story, but unfortunately the lack of quoatation marks makes it nigh on unreadable.
unknown chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
you should put quotation marks for tour dialog, it is confusing
Everlasting Purple chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
This is such a good story, but I can't stand that the talking doesn't have " these". I can't stand it. It's driving me nuts! I'd be happy to do it for you for Merlin's sake.
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