|Reviews for Happy Birthday|
| Marie Nomad chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
That is disturbing. Pretty good but very disturbing. Although, it was a little jarring. Maybe you could have some buildup or something. But it is pretty scary.
| loved it chapter 1 . 12/4/2004
hey i hated it was gross and eww you shouldn't write stries like that for one they are not god and you suck at wring you should be banned from fan gic you oh
| Harm Marie chapter 1 . 8/11/2004
This is weird because you posted it on my birthday. Poor Dawn.
| kay chapter 1 . 8/11/2004
| N170017 chapter 1 . 8/10/2004
I liked the story, it was very original. It was also kinda sad but there was great formatting!