|Reviews for Getting the Girl|
| Lee chapter 10 . 5/1/2005
I really like this story so far! I know, Genis can read a book to Presea! That would be so cute. Well, I hope you have more Kratos/Raine and definetely more Sheelos later on! Update soon! :D
| Rose-Wisteria chapter 10 . 4/17/2005
Sorry, I didn't review this fic for so long since you updated. So sorry! And I guess you've been very busy as well to update really late, but it's all right.
Anyway, I thought the first half of the chapter was kindof rushed. At least, to me it was. The whole scene when Colette was taking Presea to get a present was very quick-paced compared to the rest of the chapter. So I guess the only problem with this chapter and your other ones is it's too quick and not enough detail on this and that, you know what I mean. It could have been a little longer at parts as well. Other than that, you're doing fine.
Still the short chapters eh? It's okay. We won't complain if that's how you write it. I still like how you develop the plot and the characters as this fic moves along. The whole sealing room is a cute touch, and with the ending and all. I actually do believe that though. I mean Presea was like in a coma for years... she might have "forgotten" how to read or never learn in the first place so I thought the idea is fabulous. Genis comes in the picture now!
Like always, I want a little more Sheelos but of course, concentrate on Gesea on the most okay? Keep it up!
| MarcheRutolski chapter 10 . 4/15/2005
Wow, great story, I loved the whole thing, all facts were at least semi-true to the storyline and the detail is perfect for a fanfiction, I would love to see more of this somewhere in the future, out of all tos I have seen or written this surpasses mine in many many ways great story!
| Blahgirl chapter 10 . 4/13/2005
Hehe...this is getting good. That was too classic! Can't wait till you update!
| Karina Gomez chapter 10 . 4/9/2005
O.O! Presea don'know how to read? AHAHAHAHAHAHA! *falls off chair, still laughing* *sighs and wipes away tears*. Sorry 'bout that, but it's funny. I really love gesea fics though. Specially Presea *huggles Presea*. Oh yeah, evil Lloyd, Colette, and Raine. Hehehehehe. Anyway this story's great *eyes shine*. All the right pairings. Didja have to make Raine get her heart broken? That's just sad. I really like kratos/raine. Lemme rephrase that, I LOVE THEM! Could you get them together? PUh-LEZE! Anyways, update soon! VERY SOON!
| FireEdge chapter 10 . 4/7/2005
Yay! You updated! Wow, this is an interesting chapter! Very cute! The idea of locking them in a room together is a bit cliché, but its still adorable. Wow, Presea can't read? Can't wait to find out how Genis is going to teach her! Good luck on your next update!
| timmycheese chapter 10 . 4/4/2005
lol everyone is stealing your stuff
i dont remember if presea knew how to read or not, but i dont think it matters much cause you just gave them something to do in their tiny little cramped room full of corn puffs
| Story Weaver1 chapter 10 . 4/3/2005
LOL! A classic matchmaker trick. I love it.
| Urby chapter 10 . 4/3/2005
Yes! Updates! (loves)
Presea doesn't know how to read? Dang, you took it before I could do something like that. (sulks)
Won't they run out of air/food and die in that chamber? o.O
Anzway, update pleeze!
| time can take its toll chapter 10 . 4/3/2005
Yeii yeii an update _
So I'm guessing the next chapter's going to be filled with teaching-fluff... like Ed and Armony, but not quite.
I still know nothing about the character _" except that someone has silvery hair... yeah. So no OOC warnings. I'll just end this review here.
TURTLES want you to update _
| Cerse Liminara chapter 10 . 4/3/2005
Ha-ha-ha...! I can't wait to see what sort of sparks fly in that little room!
But it surprises me that Colette came up with a plan...or anything remotely inteeligent for that matter...
| E.S. Simeon chapter 10 . 4/3/2005
You did well here, So what's going to happen next? I want to know!
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/3/2005
Can't they just go out the window? She didn't cast on the window.
| Cristina Gomez chapter 10 . 4/3/2005
HUH? Presea doesn't know how to read! You think she would after all the years she's lived as. Oh well I ain't complaining. That way Genis can read to her. But why'd ypu have to stop so soon? Please update quickly. This is a great story.
| Kohakuu chapter 10 . 4/3/2005
lol. those crazy peoples...