Reviews for Catechism
TheDarkMan19 chapter 14 . 8/9
well. this was depressing as shit. I don't know why I read abuse fics they just bring up bad memories. very well written though. glad those fuckers got what was coming to them.
krill64 chapter 15 . 8/8
All I have to say is your story is horrifyingly disturbing, astoundingly realistic and fantastically well written. It is an evaluation of the human psyche and how it can be warped, it is amazing. Truly a fundamentally brilliant story and I hope you continue writing it!
Mr.Baratheon97 chapter 15 . 8/7
This is a very intriguing story - Harry's behaviour in this story is definitely something I haven't seen in other fics before. It's refreshing. I'm happy Dudley is redeeming himself, though I was confused by how quickly his character changed in the timeline of the story. I really hope that this story hasn't been abandoned, even though it's been two years or so since being updated. Please pick this back up, I really like this story.
divineangel1984 chapter 15 . 8/1
Has this been abandoned
Guest chapter 15 . 7/27
Love your story please continue if you can.
Eriyum chapter 1 . 7/23
I feel dirty. I feel like I was violated and like I did violate someone. This is not a story for the faint of heart, I happen to be one of them.
popecatapetal chapter 15 . 7/6
I really like this story. Harry is so pathetic and infuriating, and I really hope he gets deprogrammed successfully.

The one thing that seemed a little excessive was Vernon's sexual abuse. I don't normally it if it fits in with the rest of the narrative, but they didn't even beat him with bare skin for fear of contamination. I find it difficult to mesh the two together.

But otherwise, top notch fic. I will be keeping my eye out for updates.
GodricGeoffreyGryffindor chapter 15 . 5/26
It's not surprising that you just stopped writing this story. It was compelling, yet unrewarding, angsty and boringly repetitive. It sucks the reader in with hope that Harry will get better, then his circumstances actually get worse and then the story finally stops. Like porn, it's lacking in redeeming social value.
FurtiveLeisure chapter 15 . 5/26
This is lovely dark. I'm glad Harry's going to get help though, however imperfect it may be. I can see why you might not've written since 2014. While I do wonder how Harry would face the challenges sane!Harry did in J.K. Rowling's universe, I can see how difficult it is to continue now that Harry's problems have been discovered. Good luck though!
analise17 chapter 7 . 5/22
wow is that hat good! He got Harry to sleep in bed!
Scarylady chapter 15 . 5/21
Ohhhhh dear. Listen to the coach wizards! LISTEN TO THE COACH. ;_; I was so shocked and excited to see this update-I must have missed it the last time I checked 3 It's always an unexpected gift to see a fic update after being dormant for a while.
Scarylady chapter 14 . 5/21
Talk about Conditioned to Accept Horror Dudley. ;_; Well...the situation can improve...
Tomb Raider and Walking Dead chapter 1 . 4/28
Damn...
bookworm661 chapter 15 . 4/15
This is intriguing. I hope you will come back to this story and update it. I want to know what Dumbledore, Severus, and Madam Pomfrey say to Harry. Does it work or does it backfire?
garfield chapter 1 . 4/9
i love how vernon fucks harry's warm tight little ass that ass knows how to make a guy torture and brainwashing was well written. I hope harry punishes himself like a hous-eelf and never heals.
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