Reviews for Flawless
sif chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
very interesting. very good.
Miss Luna chapter 1 . 12/1/2004
I'm not sure how much of this is original. Your add-on thoughts are really good and describe the situation well, but it's hardly your own work. You mainly just copied and pasted the manga. Maybe if you take this concept and build upon it by going further in the story, minus the word-for-word manga script.
SidheLady chapter 1 . 10/19/2004
I loved this a lot. Good job.
lastingdreams chapter 1 . 8/15/2004
Great stories like all your others but try to make them longer you know with chapters and all you do know what those things are right...

Luv ya ;)

Melimea chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
This was very good! Hope you post The YGO ones soon! Can't wait for more stuff like this! .

DragonXtreme chapter 1 . 8/12/2004
I likie story. Highly detailed. You definately read the manga. Bwahahahahahahahahaha
inhyel chapter 1 . 8/12/2004
This was sounded almost like a poem. And so reminded me of the book The City with no People...or was that your intention? Tee-hee...frum the luvably insane inhyel
Dkmagby88 chapter 1 . 8/12/2004
i like the angst in this story. it's very thought-provoking and well written. ur title creeped me out b/c there's another chobits story calle m. but ur story was still very interesting
adam chapter 1 . 8/12/2004
u made yumi in the perfect way i thought u couhgt her fellings right on nice story
sarsperilla chapter 1 . 8/11/2004
good...well written...but very very not original. (i know you mentioned


sorry, fealing really spacey today. I'd love to read something you speant more time on, though...

hey, do you like hp fics? If you do, could you please r&r mine?

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