Reviews for Learn to Fly |
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![]() ![]() Wowies. This is one cool story. I'm glad the vets are arriving in the story soon! Keep writing cos this all rocks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue. Like a said, I hope to see an ending, so please stick with it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mwuahahahha! you just cant seem ta shake me off can ya? sorry for me extremely late review,school started and all that..Emotional therepy needed for myself aswell lol Anywho, still luvin the story..is this gonna turn into Nate/Allegra? I still demand more Atomika though! lol..PLEASE! I AM A FAITHFUL REVIEWER AFTERALL? *hinthinthint* lol ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love your story n all. But, i wanted to ask a few things from you (these are optional tidbits of advice) 1. I think you could do a little better on the names of the chapters, you have a pretty good vocabulary, so it shouldn't be too hard, and 2. Could you please try to make your chapters a little bit longer, i know its hard, but some of the best stories on this site are the ones who give you a 20 page chapter every 4 months, ya know. Other than that though, I really love your story! Update for the kitty . |
![]() ![]() awesome keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. A lot of authors for SSX 3 stories never finish them. I seriously hope you do, I'm really liking this. Is this whole story a before-the-game, kinda thing, or is it the whole season? CONTINUE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, bummer 'bout Kaori, but it's all good! Update for the kitty . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, howdy people! Im BACK! after a long and lovely relax in the bahamas anyway... Im lovin the story still..hey am i a faithful reviewer? *pleading eyes* I NEED CREDIT FOR SOMETHING! Love the story,update soony pleasy, thankies. -ATTOOMMIICCA- |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it i love but ... i want u 2 updade faster i can't wait for the nex feel like im gonna explode from all this waiting lol lol lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a pretty cool idea for a story. I'm glad that you don't villanize/heroize certain characters. And I wanted to know if you could do Kaori next. That'd be great. Thanx! Update for the kitty . |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Keep going, this story has GREAT potential (cant spell for shit ), and thanks foe assuring me of more Atomica ;) Keep Writing and i'll keep reviewing! A. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey hey hey I love it ! keep it up ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() God it gets better and better ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds interesting ! love it ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah lots of atomica-ness! YAY Thankyouthankyouthankyou! :kiss:..eyyw...Anyway,im loving it, keep it up! *is happy now* YAYY! A. |