Reviews for Fading Lilacs
charlie chapter 5 . 7/25/2008
YOU ARE FUCKING JOKING ME! I LOVE THIS STORY! GAHH I"M SO MAD! YOU LAST UPDATED FOUR YEARS AGO, PLEASE FOR THE SAKE OF EVERYONE'S SANITY FINISH THIS AMAZING STORY! PLLEASSEE!
The Miss Marauders chapter 4 . 8/30/2006
C xx
The Miss Marauders chapter 3 . 8/30/2006
"Can I have him back?"

Classic line! Love it!

x C x
The Miss Marauders chapter 2 . 8/30/2006
"A look of confusion had set itself on that beautiful lips, his generous lips cracked a little in anxiety." Is a bit much. No need to mention the lips twice with two different descriptions. It should be "A look of confusion had set itself on that beautiful lips, cracked a little in anxiety."

It's good though.

x C x
The Miss Marauders chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
I'm sure I've already read this...

x Cazzy x
AfMO chapter 4 . 10/12/2004
I like it so far!

James' or Peters POV would be nice once in a while! I m wondering what they think about Remus.

Hope you'll update soon!
Queen of the Paperclips chapter 4 . 10/10/2004
Thanks for replying my review. The Remus you've created seems like a really nice character. Making a pillow for Peter even though HE'S A RAT! Ahem... can't wait for your next update! I'll be waiting and sorry that this review sucks!
Alayone chapter 3 . 8/26/2004
Woot, I'm being stalked! I'll will now be moving my chair away from the window.

Heh. Poor Remy got called a piece of ass...I like how you made him pretend to be mad at Sirius though. It just reminded me of an rpg I do...
Queen of the Paperclips chapter 3 . 8/26/2004
Hi! This is a great start to your story. Try not to make Remus to shy/polite/blushing brideish/etc please. What you've done is boiled Remus and Sirius down to their bare esence. Sirius is gorgous, outgoing, and not afraid to say what he thinks. And Remus is gorgous, shy, and blushing. Try to keep it cute, but not overwhelming. I once tried to write a Harry Potter fic and I was bad. But yours is good (so far). Keep up the good work. And a lemon is a sex scene. A lime is a light sex scene. If there are any other terms you're unsure about e-mail me!
Marchwarden's Blue Eyed S chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
A lemon? It's a *AHEM* entertaining um... *cough* sex *cough* scene *coughcough* Newayz, hope u get it now!

As Always,

RUBY
Marchwarden's Blue Eyed S chapter 3 . 8/25/2004
I luv it! This chapter wasn'txactly cute, but it was great! I luved Liz and Siri fighting over Remus! Hahaha, every1 thinks that Remus has a good ass, y is that? And if he does, I will have no problem keeping quiet and drooling over it! HAHAHA, This is great, I am SO happy u'll update more! *Ahem* pRobably... *sigh* can we just kick the probably out? Hehe!

As Always,

RUBY (call me Ruby)
EndomorphUsagi chapter 2 . 8/23/2004
i love this story! lol. i thought you were a inu yasha fan cuz of your name...kikyo steals souls...wel, update please!
frosch chapter 1 . 8/17/2004
i like your story _

write more...

but please dont write a lemon... please

mach weiter so...

frosch
Alayone chapter 2 . 8/17/2004
Ooh, wonderful, you updated. Very descriptive, it was nice. And how did you know love cookies?
Marchwarden's Blue Eyed S chapter 2 . 8/16/2004
Aw, that is so cute! UPDATE SOON! LUV IT!

As Always,

Ruby
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