You really don't like this? I've been reading a lot of South Park fics, and this is by far the best thing I've come across in the fandom. This story is the first one I've come across that gets Cartman exactly right, and I also adore the way you've written Kenny and Wendy. Stan and Kyle may be a bit out of character, especially in the chapters you wrote after you lost interest, but even still this is an amazing feat within the fandom. I personally would love to see more of this, but if you don't want to, you don't have to, obviously.

What an amazing story I'll never find out what happens next it's been too long since this has been updated it has probably been abandoned and no one will probably see this comment but I like to say truly amazing story got me crying I feel sorry for both Stan and Kyle

AHHHH PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!

I haven't reviewed in a few chapters, but I just felt like I had to say I'm glad to see this story is going to get an ending. This is the only South Park story I read, and your writing is very compelling. I've been having a tough time with student loans and finances and stuff, but your update the other day was very nice. I stop what I am doing when I see an update. So, yeah. Just wanted to give you a virtual pat on the back for outstanding work!

I know it's been exactly eight years, but I'm kind of disappointed of being left with a cliffhanger. Not to mention, this cliffhanger may or may not be (probably not) finished.

*cries*

IT WAS SO GOOD!

For someone who claims to hate this story, you're doing a pretty good job at writing it. It'd be pretty cool if you were able to finish this story at twenty chapters. I sincerely do hope you finish this story sometime in the near future. Until then

I really like this fanfic of yours! Not many SP fanfics have the same aspect of plausibility as this one and i was really excited to see how you ended it... you can imagine my devastation :)... if you ever feel like it, and if you're still here, i really want to encourage you to finish this story! Its extremely good!

CLIFF HANGER! PLZ FINISH THIS STORY ITS AMAZING!

please finnish it! end it and chapter 20! always good to end on a even #

Aaa damn it ended too soon D:! :Lunar wished to see the CaNdy aftermath too~!: really hope that may have the time and inspiration to update this beautiful piece of work;(

Please, please update this! I'm so hooked and I need to know what happens next. I feel in love with your fic about 5 years ago and was saddened to see it wasn't updated, and potentially never will be. But I still hope you find time/ambition to finish this story!

i actually liked this, but i'm not going to pester you for an update. I can understan the feeling of not liking a fic. There are pobably only two unfinished fics i have that i have the heart to finish, and only one of them isn't posted, lol, anyway, i loved how you made kenny's death's, like something out of final destination, but funny, lol. Gonna go read ur other fics now, l8

I won't ask you to update since you already stated you hate this story. I think it is an interesting concept and I can see Kyle and Cartman having the terms of the bet be to a number of how many times Kenny dies.

I like how it was coming together but I understand that stories die. I liked what you did so far though.

Yay you.

((I'm alerting on the off chance something happens))

dude you need to fukin update i hate waiting

So, I know it's been four years, but it would be amazing if you posted a summary of what was going to happen. Seriously, the angst was becoming epic. I would just like to know the ending ;;