|Reviews for Short|
| WhyDidIWantToDoThis chapter 1 . 3/15
Great take on the relationship
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 1/3
I love everything about this piece. It's not often we get into Alphonse's head about something like this and you captured it well.
| a Mysterious Illusion chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
This is... there's no proper adjective for what this is. :3 *favorites*
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
..huh.. #chukled softly
[wanted to say something, but let mouth shut because might said something nonsense] :)
| rezzkat chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
Wow. Thats a different way to think of it, I have NEVER EVER thought about it like that, so thank you for bringing it up.
Now that I've read the thought provoking fic I can have something to think about! Haha, but really, well done.
| Nom de Plume chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
I've always been a sucker for cycle starts & ends, especially if they are done right. This baby right here- was obviously done right.
Perfect amount of angst. Not a lot and yet, not too little. Just per - fect. Almost kind of subtle, even. The humor was very natural too, and that may be because your characterization of them was right on the tiny dot. I could hear their voices in my head and their dialogue as if it was right from the anime/manga. Your insight into Al's opinion on his brother's "pet-peeve" was very interesting and believable. Kudos, kudos, and bravos to you.
| Miss Light Bright chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
So freakin' cute!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
great story! loved it
| Yuu3 chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I love it. That's is all I can say.
| ambry chapter 1 . 7/27/2013
omg i'm crying! Your fanfic is amazing! woaw I just can't find the words to tell you how much i love it! Bravo!
| EchoRose480 chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
This was adorable. :3 Thank you for writing it.
| Yuki Suou chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
| iamgrell chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
This was PERFECT! It was so sad and sweet and funny, never stop writing.
| Z. U chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Are you an author?
That was really, really good!
| Justin Is TheSun chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Humor and angst! Basically the premise of FMA. So well written, and it made me think about what it was like for Al that first night. I would just like it if you fixed the few grammar mistakes. Those kinda things don't belong in such a good one shot _.