What on earth is up with the formatting? This has to be one of the most unpleasant reading experiences ever just because of that.

My god hes such a pussy

Harry is pussy

I thought Harry was going to experiment with changing his appearance like Tonks?

Story format still needs editing though. there are breaks in sentences where there should just be a spacebar.

I've really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for all of the hard work you've put into this.

No ww knowledge

Why are they just not acknowledging the fact that narcissa and andromeda are sisters? Like Tonks said dracos parents are brother and sister and it’s like… no she’s your mums sister bruv… insulting your genetics lowkey. And then Andromeda comes in and says huh narcissa Malfoy looks crazy out there…

Well, my journey ends here. I was hanging on, but the dialog was a bit too much for me. Writing for excitable 11 and 12 year olds isn't for me, I guess. Especially ones that seem to know some things they shouldn't and are out of their utter depth on other things.

Couldn't really tell what direction we were going at some points, and thought we had already gone through an entire week at the school with the way the prose was going.

I've been reading through the comments over the years and can't help but shake my head at several of them. People, this fic was last updated in 2004. That is between books five and six! So next time anyone complains about food being unable to be conjured or whatever, try to look up which books revealed that information.

You'd be surprised how many things only came out in the last two books, or in JKR's website writings and interviews.

why do you have to make the format sooo weird... love the story but the format weird

Great story!

To the guest from 30/12/2021 who posted this review:

"Im sorry for sounding like a complete nerd but when harry says"Is... is that how she made supper so quickly last night? Magic?" I'm assuming you mean conjuring it out of thin air if so then I'm pretty sure that violates "Gamp's Law of Elemental Transfiguration" said by ron in the 7th book ,chapter: the lost diadem, page"471 around the end of paragraph 2/1 and at the start of paragraph 3/4. Apart from that all in all an good fic so far."

That law only came in book 7, I think, which was released around 2007. This fic predates that.

To n k sz and the twins pranking tog e ther! Malfoy is gonna wet himself!

Love Tonks? Is Andromeda and Narcissa not sisrers in this?