Reviews for The Philosopher's Stone Retransmuted
Stormhound12 chapter 2 . 5/27/2020
Ah, I see. They did know about Harry, though it was kinda unclear last chapter. Again, Andromeda Black, Clumsy? That's pretty much it for my spiel. Kudos and keep on writing!
Stormhound12 chapter 1 . 5/27/2020
First, I think Andromeda is black haired. Second she was raised pureblood, so her speech and how she acts would be more proper and Professional. She wouldn't say "was going" she would say "I was." She'd never let herself be late. Being late is something people who don't care or understand the impact of lateness on one's reputation do. She is one of the Sisters Black, that means something. On a kind of random note, I think it would make more sense if the Tonks lived further away and harry just walked a really long distance. Like living in the same neighborhood and not knowing about Harry seems far-fetched. Its a beat story idea, and I'm interested to see where it goes. Kudos and keep on writing!
TheBluePilgrim chapter 13 . 5/2/2020
Food can't be created with magic...
Sage-of-the-six-paths7777 chapter 10 . 4/5/2020
Just wanted to ask are Tonks and Harry Potter going to end up dating or be together and that sort of way?
Frost Merry Darkness Luver chapter 3 . 3/31/2020
Is mr. Tonks dead?
Locothehood chapter 24 . 3/29/2020
So small break on cliff hanger chapter nice
also im taking a stab in the dark but i think leon might be a vampire
"Mirrors would do me no good"
His ability to almost vanish with little to no notice his advanced sense of sound and agility and the fact that he is up most of the night.
A mysterious illness he has to deal with in the dead of night.
Id say werewolf if it were not for that bit with the mirror the as gold eye's are actually a sign of lycantropy in many stories.
Pteaset chapter 1 . 12/17/2019
Love it
Eagle-Eyes chapter 24 . 9/21/2019
Great story but you've left me hanging...

Keep writing as life allows
Corwyn chapter 24 . 9/16/2019
Loved this story! Thanks for sharing it with us.
Black-Warlock chapter 24 . 9/14/2019
Great story i really enjoyed it. Loved the prank idea
Black-Warlock chapter 2 . 9/13/2019
Good chapter i like the bashing tonks gave dudley
Black-Warlock chapter 1 . 9/13/2019
Good start of the story, curios to see where it will lead to
Winlyn chapter 24 . 8/24/2019
They are so cute!

It's almost infuriating how they are too young to understand what's going on between them...
Seriously though... Those little Honks scenes you added are among the best things with this story and definitely some of the most realistic behaviour I've seen written for a not-quite-couple this young.

This rewrite of the first book is fantastic, removing certain situations caused by outright stupidity and adding depth to certain characters through clever additional scenes. Also, there is the mysterious Leon who might just drive me round the bend just by existing; taunting me with the vagueness of his whereabouts and the tiny wierd hints. Current guess... Some kind of wierd vampire...

Thank you for the story and I'll be back at the end of the next one!

fhl1234 chapter 24 . 7/20/2019
Fantastic first book. You're a brilliant author and I want to thank you for posting this wonderful series. Kudos to you for a job well done. I can't wait to finish reading this wonderful series.
Tankinator175 chapter 24 . 5/25/2019
You did mention it in one of the eat chapters with Leon. I believe it was in the chapter where they meet during DADA.
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