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Interesting first chapter to be sure

I had got a pack of Bertie Botts every flavor beans from Walmart and gave my my the vomit one and she threw up in our car. then i went to my friends house ate barf was fine, then i ate Sausage and threw havent had it since

Your pacing has been really good. I wasn't sure in the earlier chapters but your writing has really smoothed out it seems. If I didn't know this was fanfiction I would think this is a legitimate book. Kudos and keep on writing!

Metroid prime 2, huzzah. Kudos and keep on writing!

The first quidditch match was very important though. It showed snape and quirell and foreshadowed that as well as snape's connection to Harry's parents. Ludos and keep on writing!

People think werewolf? My first guess is either vampire or anorexic. I'm curious as to see what the deal with him is though. Kudos and keep on writing!

Aha. I feel slightly stupid, but the tonks are completely au then. Here I am thinking they're someone they are not. I don't know if I missed that in the description or what, but it wasn't explicitly stated, that I saw. My first inkling was when she referred to narcissa with her full name, i thought it was rather weird. Neat. Kudos and keep on writing!

What happened about the thing where tonks realized he's a metamorphmagus? That was kinda dropped, but in general you keep skirting around it almost like you're trying to build anticipation, but it would be better to just get the point. Where is Ted tonks? Harry has stayed for what 2 full days and we haven't seen him at all. Anyways kudos and keep on writing!

Ah, I see. They did know about Harry, though it was kinda unclear last chapter. Again, Andromeda Black, Clumsy? That's pretty much it for my spiel. Kudos and keep on writing!

First, I think Andromeda is black haired. Second she was raised pureblood, so her speech and how she acts would be more proper and Professional. She wouldn't say "was going" she would say "I was." She'd never let herself be late. Being late is something people who don't care or understand the impact of lateness on one's reputation do. She is one of the Sisters Black, that means something. On a kind of random note, I think it would make more sense if the Tonks lived further away and harry just walked a really long distance. Like living in the same neighborhood and not knowing about Harry seems far-fetched. Its a beat story idea, and I'm interested to see where it goes. Kudos and keep on writing!

Food can't be created with magic...

Just wanted to ask are Tonks and Harry Potter going to end up dating or be together and that sort of way?

Is mr. Tonks dead?