That was GREAT! So sad, though. Wonderfully written.

Beautifully written, moving and sad. I liked your portrayal of Feanor's sons, especially Maglor. The might-have-been element was handled well, and if you take this to a metaphorical level (Maglor's chance of happiness destroyed by the Oath), it doesn't matter if some elements are perhaps not quite canonical.

I like it a lot. Good rhythm and feel to this. It has been a LONG time since I've read the Silmarillion, so I don't remember a lot of detail from it... there are a few references I don't understand because of that, but you put just enough detail in to structure the story. I was able to follow what was going on w/o too much struggle (and that was merely from my own ignorance of story details, not because of your writing).

Very nicely done!

wow go me! *dances* nice tale - canon fairly stuck to so : ) but I am pretty sure that in one of the histories it says maglor's wife stayed in Valinor. (hes mine anyhoo! heh)

Out of all the Seven sons of Feanor, Maglor probably did suffer the most. I think you characterized all seven of them perfectly, especially Maglor. And, I promise to leave him alone...as long as I get Maedhros ;)