Reviews for Deep
panictowel chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
I liked the whole blur this was written in – suddenly you were just years back or in others thoughts and I liked how you did that without explaining too much. just letting it be. stand for itself and – let us feel the confusion, the memories – which are often some kind of blur and snippets and back and forth… well written, in my opinion!

loved that line/thought:

- 'He is very aware of the hairs on Sirius’ arm standing up, bumps raising, probably at the feel of his breath on the skin. He can imagine that Sirius has forgotten what it felt like, having someone this close.'
adari94 chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
OMG...my jaw seriously dropped at the end. AW REMUS! and Sirius! and Remus and Sirius. I love them in every combination, whether it's together or grieving alone.

This was really good!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
Utterly heart breaking but in the best way. I'm aching for all of the lost boys.

I've recommended this over at accio_rs_fics.

community./accio_rs_fics/
Wuff chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
How sad and touching. The ending was perfect. It was very well written, especially the transitions between the different scenes.
Sorn The Lucifer's Angel chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Breathtaking. Beautiful. Sad.

I loved it, so much.

Your writing style is easy, realistic and wonderful. Congratulations.

Sorn
Nymeria chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
agh. truly heartbreaking.
slash chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
perfect concept...not creepy at all *rolls eyes* I still love it and I can relate to Remus at the end...more than I'm willing to admit to myself.
Ookami-Lupin chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
Amazing story! So much emotion is laced through out it! Favorites!

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la petite fille noire chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
Adorable...

Sometimes a little bit confusing but adorable!

I really like it...

Hopefully youve got other stories, Ill have a look...

So, go on like this... )

bDE
Silver Salamander chapter 1 . 11/6/2005
That made me cry :S It was very good. I like very much.
Prisoner-of-Sirius chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
*cries* por moony!
Magus Durron chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
That was awesome! I just love it... there's nothing more I can really say... it's just a really awesome fic... about memory... woah...
WEAT-BIX chapter 1 . 8/15/2004
omg

its so totaly sad

great story lin and great way to write it
Doctor Zosfmov chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
Beautifully written, with some quite sickeningly graphic description. The final twist was shocking and dark in realisation.
mystic-angel5 chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
O wow, this fic was utterly fantastic!

I loved it. Expertly written, no ooc-ing, great concept.

I only have one piece of advice: the pov's were a bit jumbly, since there was no deviation line, but, it was mostly easy to tell from the bat which character was in play. Just that one tip though, that perhaps a couple asterics between pov's would do the trick and make this fic PERFECT. As it was nearly such.

Again, brilliant fic.

~Jaimy~
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