Reviews for A Short Love Story
Ohohen chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
hm...cheetos huh? yeah...has a big effect while writing fanfiction...haha...joking...nice story...but i like may/misty friendship stuff more...
Darksoldier23 chapter 1 . 9/16/2004
its good but would of been better if you added atwist to it...a twist of lemon..
Spiraea Kozak chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
hey! that was unexpected... great job btw...
Lady Black Widow chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
You got this idea from eating Cheetos? You are officially banned from Cheetos forevermore. Apart from the whole girl/girl thing (which, BTW, there was a warning! If you are disgusted by homosexuality, don't read the fic) it wasn't too bad for a firstie's first fic.
Left the site chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
Yuck yuck yuck!bgh!U know,even though this is ur 1st fic,im sorry but i just had if ure offended but its just me.I hate same-sex couples.I guess u support would ever think about a girl kissing a girl?he story wouldve been nice if it were but thats my opinion