Reviews for The Photo
PadawanMage chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
We know what happened to Zack, but I always wondered about Lyta. Some of the books involving Bester pointed to her dying while trying to kill him, but it was vague at best.

Nice little insight with these two, while the rest of the universe goes nuts around them. And yeah, I can see Zack playing around with the bike as well as having these two have fun in that photo machine.

Good Job!
Fondued Jicama chapter 1 . 8/16/2004
You still have a few grammar errors I'd look out for, but the story is wonderful. It is short, but it gets to the point; it pulls the reader into the scene.