|Reviews for No Naka Ni Kokoro No Okmai|
| Meg Wolf 21 chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
why did ya stop i wanted to see the lemons you promised on chapter 3 what happened? can yo please contine even if it has been way too long please just contine i love this story tsumextoboe is the best couple in the world
| Meg Wolf 21 chapter 2 . 11/27/2010
aww i know its a little late but can you at least finish chapter three with the tsume/toboe lemons it be very much apreshiated you've done a wonderful job so far i felt a tingle in my spine and butterflies in my stomach when i read the last part so if you dont mind pleeeeaaaassss
| Dakuenjeru chapter 2 . 9/29/2010
Can you please update soon? Pretty please with toboextsume on top!;P
| Shadow315 chapter 2 . 8/26/2008
Put more UP! I wanna know what happens and please tell me you have a sex/mating scene! No one does and there are barely any stories!
| theo darkstar chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
hey i just read your story and i luved it...and i absolutly love Hige to bits! hes my fav, followed by Kiba...im sad that you havent put any more of it on...and the whole Kiba-Hige is good! they are suited for each other!
| A.S.A chapter 2 . 4/8/2007
This is so romantic!
I can wait for the next chapter, please continue with you best.
| foxyfire89 chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
You are NOT STUPID! You are NOT WORTHLESS! You are not USELESS! GET IT THROUGH THAT THICK SKULL OF YOURS!
P.S. You better be reading these.
| shadows-insanity chapter 2 . 8/8/2005
good! you should update soon. please!
| Wren chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
This was a very cute fic, but I found the Japanese to be distracting and unnecessary. Other than that, great job!
| Draechaeli chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
I just keep reading your fic over and over it's so good! you have got to update soon! Please!
| Silent Angel 1291 chapter 2 . 6/2/2005
"Scar just wanted to protect Fluffy."
Aww... I'll be quoting that for weeks now. Toboe deserves a nickname like "Fluffy". Heehee. Squirrels! Sorry. Oh! I want Hige to bring ME some Cotton Candy! No, Toboe and Tsume would be better… (Whether I mean I’d like Tsume and Toboe to bring me Cotton Candy or I’d like Hige to bring me Tsume and Toboe, you’ll never know…) Anyway, update soon, please!
| Sea Mitress chapter 2 . 5/18/2005
This story is really well written :D
You're portraying the characters perfectly, especially Tsume and Toboe IMO.
The last part just about melted me, aww!
You made my curiosity perks: do you know where I can find AMVs with Tsume and Toboe?
| Draechaeli chapter 2 . 4/7/2005
good story I like sara she's cute! I know I know a one time charecter, but I love her reasoning. the story is good though I like that Cheza is in it. I remembered you mentioned that people were contradicting some of your Japanese words that were correct by your dictionary. I don't know what they said but I always learned wolf was ookami and okami meant government but I get what your saying either way. if it helps I use onldict/ (remove spaces). well please update soon I can't wait for Toboe and Tsume's turn in town I good time for Toboe to prove that he is wolf not mouse! please update soon.
| ok cool chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
I liked it but does allow wolves with Tsume like scars or a callor or something?
| Kiba Tsuki chapter 2 . 1/20/2005
I enjoyed your story so continue it. This is not a request. I will join this pack of yours w. geocities sanguinary_
Look for me I will grace your lands soon.