Reviews for Not Quite There Yet
echoing noise chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
very nice, I like how you described the temptation...

I always thought he'd cut himslef out of frustration...

Angry cutting, to get away...

But in this, he knows he's got to stay...

Not quite there yet, no not quite there yet...

But he'll reach that point, wanna bet?

there, a poem. no idea what I was doing, but, hey, not like you're going to turn away a review... I like it, very poetic in a way.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
This could have so easily happened when that MOB told everyone to stop writing Harry.
Jemma Blackwell chapter 1 . 6/24/2007
Oh my god, scary!
Tina101 chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
Wow, I really liked it! It showed a sense of maturity in Harry. That's a hard choice to make. I have a friend who couldn't make that choice, but luckily she was stopped. Keep writing!

secretlycharmed14 chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
Um..I loved this it displayed just how much Harry was willing to go to deal with his pain. I really think you should continue. Even if this was a oneshot. Please continue I want Sirius to realize what Harry goes through. And if not Sirius then at least his friends.
wild wolf free17 chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
Beautiful and tragic.
peacockgal17 chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
Woah...deep...i like...
YamiClara chapter 1 . 9/17/2004
oh dear

pretty sad
Halatia Artemis Louise Potter chapter 1 . 9/7/2004
Ooh. Lovely little fic. Maybe you'll write more?
kab24 chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
This is really good! I can't wait for more, HURRY HURRY!
Dugleik chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
...this is brilliant, planning on adding more chapters? 'Cos I would read them
Hermey chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
well, you got me interested...
missamy-lm chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
so...angstyness! *cries* please update soon! *begs* PLEASE!
Elvenkind chapter 1 . 8/14/2004
I like this beginning... sounds like alot more to come. Harries feling seem very genuine... and I like the bit about the "daymares"..

keep it up
nightchild87 chapter 1 . 8/13/2004
i like this alot... i cant quite pick out what it is exactly but something sets this story apart...
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