Reviews for This Twisted Game We Play
Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2016
um mm okay that's a little creepy lol
Devious Thoughts chapter 2 . 8/6/2005
Very interesting story. I like the concept of it and how you play out Robin and Raven.
8808 chapter 2 . 6/11/2005
TheSilverChakra chapter 2 . 5/29/2005
Dude, cool much? Oh my God You have to update! NOW!

PS: Lyrics from "Hello" and "Everybody's Fool" by Evanescence... good touch
bob chapter 2 . 3/10/2005
M-hmm. Somewhat creepy, kinda confusing(with the two Ravens?) and definitely twisted! Good luck with this one! Keep writing! Act like a leprechaun! Try a magic trick!

distracted by zombies chapter 2 . 2/10/2005
This was good, plz keep updating as soon as you can!
ISoundLikeARockstar chapter 2 . 1/16/2005
Wow. Cool story. I LOVE Cruel Intentions. That movie rocks. And so does this story.
maya-sleepy chapter 2 . 1/1/2005
Evanescence great touch to it I love Hello it's my fav. song keep up th great work!
maya-sleepy chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
ooh It's great!
Elsa chapter 2 . 12/31/2004
interesting... wonder what will happen next...


Elsa chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
intersting theme choice, but i like it. on to the next chapter.


cindycindy549 chapter 2 . 12/6/2004
it was good
Killer Moth chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
Interesting approach.

Given Raven and her comic Machiavellian side, I can see this.

Your Robin was fine. I think your Raven in the second chapter was a bit too emotional or...could have more mature in her rage. She sounded a bit...too much like a teenager. Raven as part of her training can pull off being an adult rather easily.

My other issue would be Raven and the physical part of the relationship given her past and sexual identity. Just a bit leery.

But overall, interesting scheming. Keep it up.
Pixie10111 chapter 2 . 12/5/2004
hm... this is getting interesting.

Ok, I totally love your story, but one question, where does the tragedy come in?

Pixie101, the fairy with a serial number!
King Cheetah chapter 2 . 12/5/2004
Oh, nicely done! Good to see you back on the beat. _

Your humble servant,

King Cheetah
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