Reviews for Asa
Misaki Takahashi Akihiko chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
It's weird how cutting has become such a fad.

It's like 'Look at me, im an emo' not 'look at me, i need love and help'.

I cant tell you how many people i know that not only dont hide it, but flaunt it cuz its cool now.

Fads bite ass.

That's my ranting.

Nice story.

Mosho chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
I'm at a lost for words. All I can say is that I'm now a serious fan of your work.

Your fic's are a must read!
SoYeah chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
This story is brilliant but depressing, I hope you continue, if you are planing to.
Tsuna Dragon chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
wonderfully written. Keep it up_
Devil of hope and dreams chapter 1 . 2/28/2006
I don't think Naruto ever was the happy-go-lucky type of guy...

He's more like a guy with broken hopes and dreams with a fake mask upon his emotionless face...
dyyan5253 chapter 1 . 1/27/2006
is this the ending?
x se chapter 1 . 4/27/2005
Awesome, but will there be more?
Fixd chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Hey. I stumbled across this fic and you know what, I haven't felt so deeply for a long time. The poem just reminded me of myself. I was depressed, and I wrote and wrote and wrote, then I started cutting myself. I don't do it anymore, but it seemed like the only way out. You're right, it is a serious issue this days, and I only wish it would stop. I have no visible scars, but somedays, you can't help but wonder what people would think if they knew you used to cut yourself...

Thank you so much for writing this fic. Hiding is always a part of cutting, and so is bottling up emotions. But sometimes we need to face up to what we have done.
scryoko chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
Wow... I don't usually read poems but that.. that was really something. Different, unique and damn good. I think that your portrayal of Naruto and Sasuke wasn't out of character at all actually. And I agree - someone who has lived Naruto's life couldn't have come out of as simply a "happy-go-lucky idiot." I see that both Sasuke and Naruto wear masks; Sasuke wears his behind a pretense of aloofness and indifference, while Naruto hides his behind a grin. Both such very strong people.. you just gotta love 'em. Another fic by you that I absolutely love. Maybe I haven't read enough Naruto fics but I think that your fics are unique - or rather, the approach that you use for the fic is creative and *really* damn good - but I think you got the gist of that already, huh? _~

- sailor c. ryoko
BookWired chapter 1 . 12/28/2004
I love your story and the poem too. I have to agree though with you because everything he's gone through how can he be happy all the time. I like the way you portray Naruto and Sasuke. Please update. This is something different. Please don't tell me this is the end.
Archangel Rhapsody chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
Interesting, something different to read.
Fantasy's Magic chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
um, does the story end here? I hope not, I really want you to keep going. (kudasai!) This has a really good start... you could make a good story out of this...

From A Reader,

me chapter 1 . 8/31/2004
owari? you could've easily produced a plot, even a small one. u_u but i guess it makes a point. and the poem is wonderful.

message to fellow ppl: cutting is dumb! and you'd have to wear long-sleeves all-year round. nyahh!
Arika-of-the-Demons chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
nice one i really like this one even though Naruto can't scar cuz the fox heals him i still really like it!
Yuen-chan chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
Aie, this is dark. But methinks you have a point.
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