Reviews for 1st year at hogwarts
LegendaryLostSoul chapter 14 . 4/10/2005
excellent story all in all. ill be checking the next
LegendaryLostSoul chapter 13 . 4/10/2005
hey the last two chapters were pretty good. i lik the fightin.

u might want to chech 4 grammar
LegendaryLostSoul chapter 11 . 4/10/2005
argh u should hav let the baka die
LegendaryLostSoul chapter 9 . 4/10/2005
hey i lik the demon part but u could add more to the match.
LegendaryLostSoul chapter 7 . 4/8/2005
yah hiei kicks ass
LegendaryLostSoul chapter 6 . 4/8/2005
hey wuts up with that sugarmaster guy. this is great
LegendaryLostSoul chapter 5 . 4/8/2005
haha they got a real workout didnt they
LegendaryLostSoul chapter 4 . 4/8/2005
u had to add genkai as "old lady". i hate u...well maybe not
LegendaryLostSoul chapter 3 . 4/8/2005
hey this story is getting more interesting. but wheres sango and miroku
LegendaryLostSoul chapter 2 . 4/8/2005
hmm...
LegendaryLostSoul chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
short, but interesting, ill hav 2 keep reading.

"Grandma" lol
Crazy Hyper Lady chapter 14 . 2/26/2005
You should probable separate you speaking parts better, it was a little hard to read, other that that, I really enjoyed the story plot.
Christina chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
i jus luv this story
Sean chapter 12 . 10/13/2004
*clap clap clap* brilliant!
sean chapter 1 . 10/11/2004
YO! wheres miroku and sango?
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