Reviews for Inside of Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() holy cow not good |
![]() ![]() Update |
![]() ![]() Ironic. The day this story was updated, 11/22 was my birthday. But putting that aside, please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm wonder what Mina is thinkin about... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another display of fine writing. I swear you make me feel bad that I'm not at your level and I'm a junior in high school. Maybe it's just because I don;t care for alot of the mechanicisms that involve great writing. Hell, I'm happy with just writing well, like I do now. Anyway, good chapter. Nice usage(?) of hindsight technique. Enjoy your evening. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that was really good. I'm glad you finally updated because this hasn't been updated in forever! Yay! And, I can't wait to see how it progresses. Yes, the muse might not be there with such a strong presence anymore (I know all about that) but, yeah, that's when you take like 3 months between updates and stuff... *nod*. Anyway, awesome job, I love it, and I can't wait for the next! ::Love Always:: Ani |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Like the story can't wait for chapter 14. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you update soon, Can't wait |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK, CHAPTER, I liked the argument between matt and kane, keep going with this I do like it. 7/10 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty good story...I luv how you are so creative... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I'm speechless. I am incapable of speech. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg, this is an awesome chapter. It sucks that I just now got to read it, but as usual, it was worth every second! Keep up the awesome work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw poor Mina:( What is she going to do now?More soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. It was really good. One question though: Mike McMahon? |