Reviews for Until I Make You Smile
RosieCheeks101 chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
'The only way I could find a guy would be if he lived in one of my books!'
*In sing song voice*Malchior reference!
Great story, loved it and love BBRae. Poor BB, kid can't catch a break.
*Virtual bone-crushing StarFire hug*
Dixxy chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Hello Goth,

Well, i must once again applause loudly to this new wonderful story of yours !

I like it because it's told Raven's POV, and Rae is my fav'.

I like it because it swarms about with emotions and feelings, the "inner life",
so much more precious than actions (the "outter life"). And it's very moving,
very delicate... and, to some extent, very sad as well !

I like it because it shows Raven trying to get closer to the one friend she
usually mocks and "ironize" about (i know, that word doesn't exist... of
course it doesn't, i just made it up for my own speech's convenience ! :)
So that means she's willing to open up a bit.

I like it because Raven is doing her best to help BB overcome the sadness
and disappointment linked to Terra's betrayal.

I like it because Raven has a sincere, straightforward, objective confession
("The only social life I have, besides my team, is my books. The only way
I could find a guy would be if he lived in my books.") about herself.

I like it because of the stunningly superb last sentence : "But Beast Boy is
my friend, and I want to protect my friends from harm." You always conclude
your stories in a truly amazing way, and this one is no exception ! Brilliant !

And finally i like it because... it comes from you ! And you've just become one
of my favorites writers for good. And i can't thank ya enough for your marvelous
fictions, Goth ! In the section i publish in (MBC), i used to say to my fav' authoress
that she shines bright in the FF sky. Well, so do ya, Goth ! :)))

Thanxxxx again for making FF such a better place thanks to yr stories !

Wish you all the best, and much courage in yr life ! I know it's hard for ya, coz i
already know 2 people resembling ya on a point, and i realize how difficult it must
be for ya. But never ever give in coz, like i said in one of my latest chapters :


And also this verse from Sting, which has become my personal moto :


Take care and be as happy as ya can, Miss !


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cartoongal11 chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
Aw man...


That was beautiful!


Thank u!

Thank u so much 4 creating this MASTERPIECE! :D
AccountKiller129 chapter 1 . 11/7/2006
dude, that was soo sweet! Raven and BB just neede this moment, so they both finally get how imoprtent they are for each other, thanks for posting, nice job ;)
DarkShadowGirl13 chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
Girl you got a lot of talent for this stuff and I'm really proud of it!:)
Green Energy chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
dude your awsome at these storys
Vivian L. Halcyon chapter 1 . 2/27/2005
- Cute
DarkGirl13 chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
I've have to admit your a really good writer and I just wanted you to please give me some ideas on how to write the story I'm workin on and it's a RavenxBeastBoy story is about this 2 teenage girls with incredible powers and there Raven's her other sister name Samara is there for some reasons and she knows Raven needed help on it but her father just keeps getting in the is a Romance/Action/adventure and with a little Spritual and lot of please give me some ideas.
KuroiTenshiRin chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
WOW! That was an awsome story! Please write more onto it. It would be really great. By Kuroi aka Raven
KakarotX chapter 1 . 9/13/2004
your bb rae storys are so great. i hope that the will get together on the show. keep up the good work, you really have a talent for this.
KC Whitestar chapter 1 . 9/1/2004
(Eyes watery) OMG! THAT WAS SO CUTE! I loved it! When Rae loses control things go boom_ Heheheh Keep up the great work with your other stories_
WolfKeeper989 chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
THat was sweet!
Raven Sforz chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
Its one of the best fics in the page.
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