Reviews for Paving The Division
Guest chapter 2 . 1/6/2015
And THIS is exactly why Harm and Mac would never work. Mac's too instinctive to stop and think about what she's doing until after she's done it.
Mystery chapter 2 . 1/10/2013
She may have been scared but she did protect herself!
germany13 chapter 2 . 6/8/2008
That's a really story! It was really funny when Mac hugged Sturgis instead of Harm ;-)

Is there a next part? I'd really like to read more!

swimERfanatic13 chapter 2 . 9/3/2006
Is there more?
The Obsessed One chapter 2 . 10/1/2005
more please!
Eddie-431 chapter 2 . 9/30/2005
Update update update! Its seems like its going to be a really funny story!
messy chapter 2 . 5/16/2005
The suspence is freakin killing me (just joking), bit keep writing, it's a awesome story.
starryeyes10 chapter 2 . 9/21/2004
great story.
emmybuns696 chapter 2 . 9/4/2004
HA! YES! Having Mac walk up on Sturgis was HILARIOUS! I WAS IN STITCHES!
heena chapter 2 . 9/2/2004
gr8 work!

when r u completing it!
mackenzie925 chapter 2 . 8/27/2004
Hee hee. Great chapter. I loved her coming up behind and saying, "I'm cold!" and wrapping her arms around the wrong sailor! That's great.
BrokenSkye chapter 2 . 8/21/2004
I can't believe that Mac thought that Sturgis was Harm! I suppose that I should have expected that... well, it makes it all the more entertaining.

Please update soon - o! I just noticed, she called Harm 'her flyboy'. (Last 2 words of the 2nd chapter) Do you think that she realised that she'd thought that to herself? Or is she still in denial?

Well, keep writing!

Jackia chapter 2 . 8/19/2004
lololololol...UPDATE SOON PLZ!
Radiorox chapter 2 . 8/19/2004
LOL! Yea, GREAT MacKenzie! LOL! This is a fun story! More, soon? ;)
littledemonpixie chapter 2 . 8/19/2004
HAHAHAHAHAHA! That was funny! I can see Mac hugging Sturgis now! THen Mac has to go knock out Harm! Well there goes her body heat for the night! Anywho I beg that you keep going this is soo great!
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