Reviews for One Giant Leap for Mankind |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Okay. Pretty sure I never reviewed this chapter before, but just to let you know: I still love this Fic. If you ever continue it, I'll be here. I reread this once every few years and still enjoy the ride and feel that bit of sadness when it finally comes to an early end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck you |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sucks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So it's been over a decade... But worth a shot I guess. It looks like you got really close to the end of this and I was really really enjoying it. I hope one day you come back to finish it off. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huzzah |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy crap. This fic is fantastic. Listen, I know you haven't done this since 2006, but you also say in your profile that you had a plan for all your unfinished fics. Please, write them. Or give your plans to someone else to write them. This is just too well done to end here. Just... Don't let it end like this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story Please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Utterly fantastic! I know it's been like eight years but if you're still writing, please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This started good, but kinda fell flat. I finally skipped to the part where Sam confesses which was good, yet the story is just dropped here. Overall, I'd recommend a version 2 of the story where you remove some unnecessary material, maybe combine some chapters, and finish at least this episode of quantum leap. |
![]() ![]() The weakest point I see here is you may be dragging out the exposition a bit. You can normally skip over some unimportant events. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is very good so far... |
![]() ![]() ![]() aaaaaaaand you stopped writing in 95...:/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm. Has anyone else wondered how it was that Jack kept commenting on Sam's side of the conversation? I thought only Al can see and hear Sam's surroundings? Or can Ziggy somehow tap in, I wonder? |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Starr Report published September 11th 1998, recommending impeachment of President Clinton. Focussing search on Cheyenne Mountain Complex, dates 11th to today, 25th September 2004." Didn't notice that before, but shouldn't it be 1998 for the second date as well? It does mention later in the story that it's five days in the past for the SGC side of things... |
![]() ![]() This is interesting, but Al and Ziggy have more clues than they realize. Jack already said his wife left him, so Beckett has to be in Jack's timeline sometime after the divorce. |