Reviews for Darkly Treacherous |
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![]() ![]() ![]() aww why didn't you finish :( thanks for the great read tho :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() When a Dark Lord is treating your son better than you are? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dun dun dunnnnnnnn |
![]() ![]() Another weak Harry fic seriously it’s like you can’t decide if he’s dark or not |
![]() ![]() its Av-a-da kE-Da-Vra not avada kA-vA-da Avada Kedavra |
![]() ![]() ![]() please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() wait! isn't Voldemort's mother, merope is from the Gaunt Line |
![]() ![]() Okay what on earth, ig we’ll see what’s up with that spell… |
![]() ![]() Okay what on earth! This is moving fast idk if I want this to happen, anyways also I keep thinking what are the death eaters thinking! We see what Voldemort and Alex are thinking/doing but all of the death eaters aren’t mentioned at all, they aren’t reacting to anything, we don’t see what they’re thinking, so I’m left in dread and anticipation as to whether this is a point of strength or weakness for Alex in the eyes of the death eaters (btw I know this was a few chapters ago, but bob mortimer? I can’t take the Mortimer name seriously lmao, for all it’s supposed to be an ancient slytherin pureblood line) |
![]() ![]() rip snape, I love his snarky commentary about the other death eaters, hopefully he survives… |
![]() ![]() I mean it’s written well, it’s just the neglect doesn’t seem to have any reason behind it HOWEVER I’ve read fics that explain it really well later on so I’m reserving judgement. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH THIS IS GOOD |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH IT'S GETTING INTRESTING |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH COMEON WHEN ARE THE POTTERS CONNA FIND OUT HE IS ALIVE |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES HE WILL |