Reviews for Darkly Treacherous |
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![]() ![]() ![]() awwwwww! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please keep posting. I love your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool! keep on writing! |
![]() ![]() I love this story and finished it in under a day. The writing was great, and it was captivating! Keep writing dude! |
![]() ![]() Espero que continues con la historia por favor gracias |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this fanfic |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry but I just have to critic your story. The story's pace if VERY fast with little regard to small details. The emotional height it holds is very low and the conversation that they're holding is a tad bit cringe worthy. Now, I can stomach bad plots and all, but this is one that I won't read again unless it's changed. Please do make Riddle a bit more fascinating than just a madman, and do put in detail about Harry's neglect. Better have a Beta to advice you. It has potential...just please fix it. |
![]() ![]() You are surely joking, right?! No more updates?! This is outstanding. Bloody amazing. It cant stop here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait, what? I'm finished already? It can't be! I can't have finished this so soon! Although, I guess I did spend all day absorbed in this... I can't believe I got so into this that I didn't even realise it ended. I'm really hoping against hope that there's gonna be another chapter soon! I really wanna read more of this Awesome fanfic! Seriously, it's so beautiful and (although, at some points the grammar isn't stellar and it was a bit slow at stages) I still absolutely adored reading this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh gosh |
![]() ![]() Please update this? |
![]() ![]() james...you stupid idoit! |
![]() ![]() Hello,this story is amazing and I really like It,can I translate It(and Sullen Fate) into Chinese and put It on the LOFTER?I will remark your name behind the you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Alex had Slytherin Green eyes, no? But here it is mentioned that his eyes were golden... Perhaps a trick of the light? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic is never getting updated again lool |