Reviews for Darkly Treacherous
Phoenix320 chapter 26 . 8/4/2013
I really like this story a lot! Well, except the potters and that Nate boy... Never really did like different boy-who lived. I hope Harry -Alex- will confront the light side with vengeance... BTW, is there a sequel?
Watermelon Lemon Drops chapter 4 . 8/2/2013
Hi, I know in the first chapter you said that there were grammar and spelling mistakes, but you spelled Avada Kedavra wrong in this chapter, and... it's weird.
Watermelon Lemon Drops chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
My favorite quote: "You'd choke on my bones or something"
Ha Ha...
Phoenix320 chapter 5 . 8/2/2013
I really like this story unexpectedly. It's been such a long time where I read a story where the potters neglect a child for the other. Very nice spelling too, one of the few where I think actually spelled the killing curse correctly. Please update soon!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
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XxAceLawxX chapter 32 . 7/15/2013
please do the next chapter!
hellkiss chapter 32 . 7/10/2013
you CAN'T do this! please, mercy.
OMG I LOVE this story
claire.catuognocal chapter 32 . 6/28/2013
thestorymaker2 chapter 32 . 6/25/2013
Dissapointed you didn't continue
Soul Vrazy chapter 32 . 5/27/2013
Update! Faster! (O_O)
jawseft cntlogin chapter 8 . 5/26/2013
harrys vision is hereditary meaing it is bad from birth. what are you, a child? nevermind. i do hope you improve. i expected lots sincethis story has many reviews but i feel im reading achild's work here.

nice plot, nice grammar but it lacks something really
jawseft cntlogin chapter 6 . 5/26/2013
you did yourself good here. but again with a middle of the story ninja authors note. dont make excuses or reinders thqt you are going to elaborate a fact in a story later.
jawswft cntlogin chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
its not hard to Crrectmistakes. you typed the killing curse wrong. are you four or something? and whats with the authors notein the middle of the story? thats not an excuse... you Culd just have voldy crack the anti Apparition wards or Smething.

i dont get why a lotof people ignre this. btw, im uSng atablet so pardon the spelling mistakes
jawseft cntlogin chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
wait, Chapter two states hes six then chapter three, hes five...

nice story but you could havemadelily adjames dislike harry logically, not just radomly having iNeractions that they shrug him of.

and a child of four can question but will not feel depession. its weird...

i cant sypathize with young harry with this Snce its unrealistic. he sould have been like atleast seven or older and stuff for him feeling sad is believable.

but! since this story has like 4k reviews, meaing it is good. and perhAps, others do not share my observations.

anyways, on to reading
kkrar00 chapter 32 . 5/24/2013
just reading this and i must say it is awesome. hope you update soon
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