|Reviews for A Friend in Need|
| Lisa66 chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
You have a nice start here. Some wonderful touches of humor and some very descriptive sentences. I look forward to your next chapter.
| stunned chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
I cannot believe - cannot BELIEVE - that people have left reviews for this story criticising a single LETTER typed wrong!
OH... MY... GOD...
Don't you people have anything better to do than scrutinise this for a TYPO?
It's sickening. And is it any wonder that more and more stories are being abandonded?
Is that what you call constructive criticism? That a "s" was typed instead of a "d" - or that there was a stray apostrophe.
It honestly defies belief.
Blackwinged bird, I honestly hope that you don't let these "perfectionists" put you off. This was a brilliant opening. I'm hooked and intrigued and I really hope that you update very soon.
You're a refreshing new talent and I'd hate to lose you from here (particularly since you've only just joined us).
| StrangePenguin chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
It's very nicely written. Keep it up, I wanna read more of this!
| Chikory chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
He he he, I love this!
Only one thing though, just a minor correction. You wrote "he mused, pushing his weary body to it’s feet." It should be its not it's. Oh well, you're only human ;o). Love the story still! Keep writing. Update soon, you know the rest ...
| Cass chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
I really liked this. I hope you inted to give each of your chapters this amount of time to develop - the pacing so far is great and the humour is spot on.
The only minor criticism (if you can call it that) is that you wrote at the end 'as normal as he's ever felt' - which should have been 'as hormal as he'D ever felt' making it past tense like the rest of your story. It could be a typo, though - we all make 'em!
| Lauren chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
Excellent opening - a bit short, but a real teaser.
I hope you write more very soon.
So far, it's a brilliant debut DM fic.
| Jamie chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
This is really good so far. PLease continue
| Feather32 chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
I just started reading DM fanfics so I think I picked the right one this is really good, update soon.
| StarFreak15 chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
Oh poor Jesse! hehe that was funny-i can't wait to read more into the story! Please update soon :)
| Numpty chapter 1 . 8/19/2004
Hey, this is looking pretty good! Poor Jess, over-worked AND getting knocked on the head...hope there's Jesse angst to come! Update soon, can't wait to read more:)