Reviews for An Empath's Burden
Regrem Erutaerc chapter 5 . 8/24/2004
_ Well, this is rather unusual for me. I'm answering an answer to a review._ Well, I guess you didn't fully understand what I ment about the bit about Trigon, but I appreciate the bit of info you gave me about Wisdom._ After all, Knowledge is for planning and intellect, while Wisdom is for knowing what would be the best course spiritually and emotionally._ Anyways, back to the Trigon thing. I didn't say that Trigon couldn't effect her other emotions, after all, a part of him is still within her mind, but that part is within her Anger emotion, so it can only gain enough power to actually truly effect her or use her powers if she is angry. But since that part of him is still in her mind, he could still effect her INDIRECTLY by having her Anger emotion meet up with her other emotions and trick them in some way. But all I was saying is that he can't effect the other emotions directly. The only one he gains power from is Anger, but that doesn't prevent him from trying to trick the other emotions, and apparently, Fear is easy for him to fool. But if Raven can feel true pure Love, it would greatly hinder his power by giving her a sense of peace and equity with her emotions, which would explain why he used that dream to make her angry at him. If she's angry at him, he can gain enough power to fool her into thinking that any of her feelings would allow him to control her, and with that fear, she'd be too afraid to love, therefore, preventing her from greatly weakening his hold over her. He'd have to trick a lot of her other emotions though, but luckily for him, due to Raven's current emotional turmoil, that should prove easy... well, except for that night anyways. Right now, she's feeling to calm and tranquil for him to effect her... but that moment of guiltiness and feelings of rejections would of been easy for him to manipulate indirectly through her Anger emotion tricking them in her mind. You know what I mean?

Now, onto my feelings for this chapter. To say the least, I am astonished. Very in character, and this chapter was truly heart-wrincing, while also having scenes that kind of ALMOST making me feel like actually saying "Aw...". I really liked it, and I can't wait for your next chapter._

Oh, and by the way Demigod, I was wondering if we could possibly talk. I'd prefer it to not be by email though. Do you have Yahoo Instant Messager or AIM? Both are free to get if you don't._ But Yahoo keeps the offline messages if I'm offline at the time you send me a message.;) My Yahoo pen name is regrem_erutaerc , and my AIM pen name is Regreme . If you can, could you please contact me? I'd like to talk with you if you could find the time._
uhouse chapter 5 . 8/24/2004
I like this chapter more than the rest of them. Updste soon
Mimi Malevolent chapter 5 . 8/24/2004
Yay!Great chapter!Cant wait 4 more!
Change-Of-Heart2 chapter 5 . 8/24/2004
" Ever wonder why Beastboy had such a crush on Terra?"

All the time. I really don't like Terra (and that is an understatement)...

Wow. That chapter was...wow. I swear I am about to cry (and to get me to do that in a public computer lab!). The chapter was so full of angst and sadness, and it was wonderful. _ I am really looking forward to more.
JAkkEd-UP chapter 4 . 8/23/2004
awesome job )
Supreme Mystic Dragon chapter 1 . 8/23/2004
I havn't read the other chapters, but I tip my hat to you. This is well thought out and well written. I tend to think that you sold Terra short, however. Beastboy turned out to be her guardian angel, but I think that her special spark helped him to realize a strength and insight that had been lacking before.

Nevertheless, very few people seem to understand the problems of being an empath, and you did a good job of conveying that.
The Big Fisch chapter 4 . 8/23/2004
Well, I guess it was something of a delayed reaction. Good thing only her room was affected! X Anyhow, good chapter, I'm starting to appreciate Raven more; such a personality is really tough to get into too. Job well done so far.

Rock on,

The Big Fisch
K. Ra chapter 4 . 8/23/2004
There are few people who have the ability to stay so true to character, as you do. It's so...well written and well done. I can picture each moment perfectly, and the faces and each scene it could be an episode of the show.

I can't wait to see this romance develop, good job at not pushing it and going too fast. :D

Great job! Can't wait for the next chapter.
awfulwaffle09 chapter 4 . 8/23/2004
.GAWD.

i feel so special!

u r the VERY FIRST PERSON 2 reveiw my reveiw!

THANK YOU! and yea i wuz hopeing 4 movie-night

fluff...but o well...

yes this iz off topic but ive been wondering...

well u c my skool wuz burnt 2 a crisp at the beginning of the summer so now we have these crappy temp. buildings!the teachers dont even have computers! and u c all the 8th graders are to take a computer lit./keyboarding class...now tell me...how r we gonna

do that without COMPUTERS?

(this iz ment 2 b retoricl[sp?])

R!

please take ur time wit ur luvly story!

i wuldnt wunt to rush u now!

...unless u leave us at a cliffy...

thank u very much 4 reveiwing my reveiw!
Mimi Malevolent chapter 4 . 8/23/2004
More!Plz write more soon!
purplemusicgoddess chapter 4 . 8/23/2004
nice. *applauds*
Pharaoh of the Skies chapter 4 . 8/23/2004
hi there, i just found your story and i must say i love it! I think BB and Raven are the best couple along with Starfire and Robin. i hate Terra and BB romances and i just want to say i really like your story. please update soon.
Happy-Raven chapter 4 . 8/23/2004
I'm a bad reviewer. (Bad manifesation of happy emotions! no cookie.) These last two chapsters were excellent! Yeah, I'd imagine she would have to seriously consider everything she does before she does it. I liked wisdom _ the guru at the top of the mountain? Excellent.

-HR
Sabishii Onna no ko chapter 4 . 8/23/2004
I really enjoy your story! It's one of the best ones i've read.

Update soon
Hogwarts-Drama-Queen chapter 4 . 8/23/2004
This is a really good story. I can tell that you try to keep the characters from being OOC. Keep up the good work. I only have one small nit-pick; isn't the book called the book of Azerath? That's the first word in her mantra.
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