Reviews for The Return of the Curse
Spaceape chapter 1 . 3/5/2006
I thought Agatha Art and Dashiell were siblings.

but they don't say it in the movie as far as I remember they only say that Art and Dash are twins ... right ?

I like it, you should update :)

Space
touchnotthecat chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
I think it was kick ass and you definatly need to update soon!
ickle chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
I don't think the story is even remotely horrible. I do, however, have a major problem with it. The three pre-cogs in Minority Report-and I'm not sure whether this is true of Philip Dick's original short story, but it definitely is of the movie-are triplets. They're all siblings. Thus, you have married a brother and a sister-twins, moreover-by saying that Agatha and Arthur married. That's all I have to say.
Forbiddensoul562 chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
Ok first off that was kinda confusing. Second off i LIKE that pool thing! Third i LIKE Wally i think he's cool! Whatever didn't mean to... be mean i liked it yes but still a little confusing.
LegacyReborn chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
Your story's not terrible! I thought it was great! :)