Reviews for Some where in time: The next Room
iShallFade chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
It was kinda annoying to read this without quotes " " around the words, but it was good.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 8/12/2006
Wow! Ok What a terrific begining! Waiting for the rest of the story!
Ana Cardic chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
Interesting. I'm wicked confused, though. I have no idea who's who and who's talking. I don't know if you're trying to be intentionally vague, but if not, you may want to add quotation marks and the occasional "he said" and "she said". Other than that, it's nice.

-BBDS