Reviews for Family
KillerAcorn chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
WOW, that was amazing!
moonypadfoot chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
beautiful! moonypadfoot
SlytherinSeduction chapter 1 . 4/6/2005
I LOVE it! It is so BEAUTIFUl! Could you make it a liitle longer though?
TonyDiMerasbedroomslave chapter 1 . 11/11/2004
A good first start into the world of Harry Potter fic. I the song was mixed pretty well with the writing. You did a good job of that and took some care in making sure the mix was good. My only real complant is that I felt it was a few bit short and could have had some more so that the song could have had a bit more play into it. But as I said before you did do a good job of controling things and you had a very clear set up and had a nice mix of talk and pov. You are on the right track as far as your writing goes. Just keep plugging away at it, it's the only way to get better at it. I should know, most of my first fics were not nearly as good as this was.
KylaRae chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
I dunno. I like it, but it seems awfully short. I'd like it a lot more if there was more fic and less song, you know? But, yeah, Harry/Tonks is a ship you don't see too often. LUV IT.