Reviews for Quiet Proposal
NAFIA chapter 5 . 1/26/2015
thanx . I had a great time readin it _
Cross Marian chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
Your portrayals of Naruto and Hinata are spot on. Your choice of words and delivery are exceptional as well. To be able to convey so much in just 7k words is amazing.

It's an absolute shame that it stopped at 5 chapters, though. It's left me so wanting that I've been trying to find stories with a similar premise, but they are few and far in between, and they aren't anywhere near the level of artistry you've displayed here.

It's been almost a decade, but here's to hoping you find your way back here and maybe expand on this some more.
usa-chan chapter 5 . 12/3/2014
This is it? Really? Is over? But the story was just beginning! You left so many questions un resolved.
usa-chan chapter 4 . 12/3/2014
Well really believable, every one is in character. I was really looking forward for a interaction between those two, but it was way to short.
usa-chan chapter 3 . 12/3/2014
Solo yeah I get that Naruto is in "probation" or something but, what happens with his work as ninja?
usa-chan chapter 2 . 12/3/2014
Really nice. Hinata's letter was so sweet, and just so her, although she always says "Naruto-kun"
Haha is so Naruto-like not to know the meaning of kanji. Really good.
usa-chan chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
I found a little abrupt the change between every scene. But I'm looking forward for the next chapter, and to know what happens next so, good job.
Godschildtweety chapter 5 . 10/24/2014
Good work
void242 chapter 5 . 2/25/2014
Is that all?
Amer Leon chapter 5 . 11/29/2013
It's sad that you stopped here...I was hoping that it would go up to the wedding anyway. You have a superb story started here...I would love to read the continuation. Thanks for writing.
Amer Leon chapter 4 . 11/29/2013
Super chapter and Naruto/Hinata interactions...very sensitive...good writing:)
Amer Leon chapter 3 . 11/29/2013
I loved the chapter. Naruto is SO much like he is supposed to be here...and no matter what happens Hinata remains steadfast in her love and devotion to him.
Amer Leon chapter 2 . 11/29/2013
Wonderful idea of Hinata writing a letter to Naruto. Well done.
Amer Leon chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
What a great first chpt...your presentation of Hinata and Naruto here are very effective...both of them are so much like they manga characters. Sweet chapter.
DayDreaming0f y0u chapter 5 . 10/20/2013
So reviewing on a phone is hard. I'm just wanna say that this is too perfect! But wait, is no one going to be aware of Naruto's heritage? You're doing a wonderful job! Oh poor Neji! I find his situation hilarious! Oh Naruto. I can't wait to swoon when he slowly discovers some of Hinata's little quirks and likes. That always warms me up!
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