Reviews for Haruka's Lines
cindermane chapter 1 . 11/11/2017
Great fic, a little short, but that's fine. My one problem with it is now I want to know what happened. It's somewhat bugging me. But that's fine.

Great story. Quite funny.
-Cindermane
Jack316 chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Haha! Haruka's more concerned with her car than her child. Tsk. Awesome story by the way!
YinYangTwin1 chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
Lol. All that practice and it didn't work
KyaniteD chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
LOL, oh, and oh so true... Happened a gazillion times all over the world, I'm sure.
Winter Oak chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
Hahaha! This is so funny! I hope you will write more stories like this. Hahaha! (Can't stop laughing!)
PTV chapter 1 . 8/24/2004
haha.. lovely story :)
apl85 chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
that was great. :)
Kyouryoku Senshi chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
Hey It's Michiru agian! I really love this fic keep up the great work!

~Michiru
PrissAsagiri16 chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
HAHAAHAH it was great this fic! :):) i laughed a lot :):) please continue! :)
Newt Salamander chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
LOL...that really cracked me up! That was a good humor fic. Nice, hope to see more of your writing.
skyking chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
I will ask the same question. Its very funny.
Steven chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
Nice. She definitly has her priorities straight ;)

Good humour
LokiLeysmith chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
LOL. Nice to see Haruka has her priorites straight.

Is this a one shot, or will the next chapter involve Michiru strangling her lover with the phone cord while seeing if her daughter and roomate are all right?

A nice little story, well done.
jem chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
hey!nice!do more!
ISteppedOnMyOwnToe chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
ROFL, thats pretty much my father *sigh* so g'dad teaches me instead...

I like the ending when:

"Pa-"

"How’s my car?"

Hope u have more funny stories like this!