|Reviews for Life Long Fight|
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/9/2013
crap my review was deleted well most of it sos about that I just realized it when I clicked the review button what I was saying was I really like your story its really interesting especially with the unconscious rivalry between sakura and hinata lol
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/9/2013
| Chance Brown chapter 24 . 9/6/2010
I began to read this story because it was Naruto/Hinata, but as the story progressed, I found that I didn't necessarily mind him with any of the characters. (Sakura was the one I least liked, but you made her character more bearable than most). When I realized it was going to be TenTen/Naruto (You hint at it a few times) I found that I still wanted to know the story, and i liked the reasonings very much. All in All I really like this story, and while I assume that it is abandoned, I thank you for the 24 chapters, they've made my week.
Check out some of my short Naruto Fics! Chance.
| anonimous chapter 24 . 4/4/2009
that was awsome...when's the next chapter coming out? i'm dying to see it!
| The Unknown Shinobi chapter 24 . 1/28/2009
This is quite and interesting plot. There is a lot of romance going on as well. I encourage you to keep up with your updates.
| Z chapter 24 . 11/9/2008
| WolfDragonGod chapter 24 . 9/30/2008
this has been a good story i hope it becomea naruto/tenten/sakura/hinata fic because choosing one isn't fair he should chose them all.
| ErO-SeN1N chapter 24 . 8/25/2008
awesome fanfic!but are you going to finish it?i realy hope so...
| Young Jezzy chapter 2 . 11/8/2007
| naruto1x5 chapter 8 . 9/19/2007
hey this is the best story EVER but do u have any other stories about naruto hinata sakura tenten message and tell me plz thx
| jon02 chapter 24 . 9/12/2007
great work. update soon
| tiger982305 chapter 24 . 9/12/2007
great story i am already looking torward for the next update
| Darthme1011 chapter 24 . 7/25/2007
bad hinata poor naruto and ten-ten
| Raptor2001 chapter 24 . 7/23/2007
[It was a cold night in the sand, the cold wind blew strongly, as a cloaked figured stayed and watched the desert, for any sigh of any one coming from the direction of the leaf, but the day came and the night was good as gone and no one ever came from that direction, the lone figures still didn’t removed his sight from there, still waiting, still hoping, the scorching sun didn’t made him move from that spot and the freezing wind of the desert didn’t either. The cloaked figure lowered the hood of his cloaked, but still a single tear drop was still visible as it reflected the moon light. She didn’t come. He thought as a passing cloud darkened the land leaving him alones, in the shadows with his pain.]
it was naruto in cloak ? he wait for Tenten ...
it was amazing story .. ican't wait for next chapter .. so mean Hinata .. i wonder Naruto' story will retrun in time skip or Naruto 's travel beyond Fire country ?
| YojimboJango chapter 7 . 7/23/2007
The content is good, but I can't read it.
Seriously, this chapter reads like a icanhascheesburger.