|Reviews for Shopping List|
| Phoenix414 chapter 5 . 7/29/2008
liked it! continued?
| Liveforthemoments chapter 5 . 7/24/2007
This is good, you deserve way more feedback than you've got (although it's not exactly a crowded fandom)
I like the dynamic between Gibbs and Tony and the established relationships between other characters. You could maybe make it a bit slower, particularly in the beginning chapters, but overall it's very good - well done and please continue soon!
| fiction junky chapter 5 . 2/12/2005
The story is good! Would love to see it finished, hope you have the time again to complete
| jtbwriter chapter 5 . 8/23/2004
This is a very good story-I like Maxine's involvement-and her caring for Tony-(sure would explain a lot about him!)
Tony is a sucker for kids even more than Gibbs-and it reads so naturally!
Thanks for a good beginning-now what?