Reviews for Who’s Lying
HoneyGoddess57 chapter 9 . 12/25/2017
Interesting fanfiction there, I was quite surprised at first that it would be Connor. When at the last chapter I saw that it was Alden I wasn't truly surprised about it, started to think it was him the three or four chapters ago. Even if this is a 2005 story, I felt that Sharon was a little out of character but no big deal.
Guest chapter 9 . 2/23/2015
You made Sharon way too OOC.
Inspired Writer 0101 chapter 9 . 11/21/2007
OMG! No! *cries* Not Alden! Why? Great story, though.
Inspired Writer 0101 chapter 8 . 11/21/2007
Okay... So it comes together. -_-
Inspired Writer 0101 chapter 7 . 11/21/2007
Hello, I'm Miracle. Anyway, good chapter.
Miracle chapter 5 . 11/21/2007
*jumps* I knew it! Now to find out the true raptist!
Miracle chapter 4 . 11/21/2007
Go Alden! Go Alden! This is getting good!
Miracle chapter 2 . 11/21/2007
OMG! Not Conner!
Miracle chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
Hey, good chapter so far.
GTAGuru again chapter 9 . 8/15/2006
I wasn't THAT surprised since I thought it was him since chapter 4. But I thought it was Brock at the end. So it half-surprised me when it said Alden. But I knew it wasn't Connor the whole time. Good story!
Your friend GTAGuru chapter 5 . 8/15/2006
Sorry, too lazy to log in. Good story. So far I'm about to start Chapter 5, and I think Alden was Nina's rapist.
Green Flames chapter 9 . 2/19/2006
nice job. i figured it was alden during the last few chapters.
Inumaru12 chapter 8 . 8/27/2005
ha alden did it when he was drunk! right? well i hope you update. holla
shikaruTo chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
two words- too short!
Kayla Tsukino chapter 7 . 5/12/2005
this story is interesting yes, but your chapters are way to short. You need to add a little bit of flashbacks as to what was going on and a little more action. Every chapter so far is nothing but one string of conversations after another. Even the best pwps don't have this much convo in them.
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