Reviews for Love Bites
msj chapter 7 . 9/6/2004
I love your story! Oh, the drama, lol. Poor Clea...talk about mixed messages. How confusing. And going to the Ball with SNAPE? Your kidding! How could she stand it? Anyway, update soon; I gotta know what happens! D

~*msj*~
hashire chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
Hatred of half-bloods, Muggle-born, and Muggles is not one of the quality of Slytherins. Many Slytherins don't like any of the above, but that doesn't mean it's a trait of the House.

Also, would Clea!Mary Sue really wanted to follow in Sirius' footsteps? Did you not read OotP? Because his family wasn't open and accepting about his Sorting, and some little Mary Sue sister most likely wouldn't be either.

Gryffindors’

Gryffindors. No possessive needed.

Sounds more like a Slythern to me.
White Night Fantasy chapter 6 . 9/2/2004
I didn't cry *does a little happy-dance*

I command you to write and update soon! And with soon, I mean now. NOW!

Friendly, happy, what-a-great-chapter greetings,

Bethje -x-
Obbsesive chapter 5 . 8/30/2004
I think I skipped a chapter... o well

this story has awesome potential...

I like your o.c. and it was an awesome plot

you update often which is awesome (I never get past 5 chapters)

*~*ALYNA~*~
White Night Fantasy chapter 5 . 8/30/2004
God dammit girl! I'm crying over here. This was just so...emotional. It's like...whoever is lying, Clea will always be heartbroken. This is just so sad. I really hope the next chapter is happier, 'cause otherwise I'm going into a depression. This is just so really sad and you can really feel the pain of it all when you read this story.

I have the feeling that i'm going trough it all, instaid of Clea. This is just so well written and...girl, you are the first one who ever made me cry over a fanfiction! The previous time I cried over a story, was when Sirius died.

Ok, I'm going to read the whole story again and I'm going to cry a little more.

Snuf Snuf Snik Snik,

Bethje -x-
pixie chapter 5 . 8/30/2004
i absolutly loved your story. I couldn't help but cry at the flashback.
Noc007 chapter 4 . 8/27/2004
This is quite an interesting story, and quite a good chapter this last one. I certainly look forward to more of it, so please update whenever you can!
White Night Fantasy chapter 4 . 8/27/2004
This is so great! I truely love this story and I really hope you will update soon.

You are very talented! Keep writing!
Larka Avilak chapter 3 . 8/26/2004
this one is nifty. heehee. ah, good story, don't kill it. blah blah, you know. sorry, i don't really know what to say on reviews. forgive me?
Red chapter 3 . 8/26/2004
Hey! I like this chapter, and i want more...
Obbsesive chapter 3 . 8/26/2004
Awesome...
HP fan chapter 3 . 8/26/2004
LOVED IT!

I think Clea should go with Snape but hang out with Remus like if that was her date. I HATE SNAPE!
Obbsesive chapter 2 . 8/23/2004
I liked it...

it's unique...

I think it's good... and your a pretty good writer...

Update... it makes me happy :D
Jelli-baby chapter 23 . 11/27/2004
Wow, great chapter! I liked what you did at the start, I thought she was crying from sadness! This was such a funny chapter. I loved Snape smiling -“That was a great first attempt,” lol! and when he tried to laugh...omg so funny! and the end... oh my god, oh my god! there isn't anything else i can think of to say but "oh my god"! update soon!

luv *~*~Jelli-baby~*~*
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